this whole story up to this point would only be 2 chapters if you removed all your yapping. i swear to god if i have to read another thing about a pathway looking nice. or how deliberate gestures blah blah blah.
Ch 18 The Start of Discussion About Hikari
A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
you yap on and on about random unimportant garbage, "his thoughts were precise and humble" "beautiful pathway.....going down this great pathway" yap yap yap
Ch 6 A Young Hyuga's Step to Revenge
A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
what stupid ass shit. just train. why would you want to make an enemy this early. youre a grown up. act like it. and you have been laying in bed and your acting like youre already a badass or something
Ch 5 Getting the Cursed Seal Use Command
A Transmigrator's Story in the Hyuga's Main Branch
theres no crossover tag, you started off with forced drama. he kills like all europe and you think they would forgive that? public execution is only way that would play out. no matter what happened to his mommy they would kill him for what he did
not a good story. .....................................................................................................................................................