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Jexelld2mthCommentedCh 17 Chapter 17: Spire Messenger- Jexelld2mthCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16 : The First Lord
- Jexelld2mthCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15: The Mist
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It's an interesting story, but I think you're a bit rushed. Sunny doesn't need to be so careless yet and release information and act in such suspicious ways. I understand that you don't want him to hide the time travel for a long time from the team, but this is too fast. Just as Neph's love for Sunny is already so strong at this point in the story? It's overkill. It's undeniable that she's liked him since that time, but not the passion that her pov showed a few chapters ago. That could have been something to develop with the time they spend together since Sunny returned and made different decisions. That's what I mean when I say that I think you're a bit rushed. That said, I'm enjoying the story, and I hope you keep writing
Ch 9 Chapter Nine: Beginning - Jexelld2mthCommentedCh 8 Chapter Eight: Confrontation
- Jexelld2mthReplied to BoredDaemonGod
Your memories are what make you you. A normal baby would be like a blank canvas, you can paint whatever you want on it, any color, any shape, any style, anything. A baby who remembers a past life is already someone made, there's nothing to argue about. This is not normal, no matter how much you twist the words to make it sound pleasant. It's not nice for the reincarnated baby, it's not nice for the family, it's not nice for anyone who will come into contact with this child.
Or that could be just my guilt at stealing the body of their child. I try to convince myself that I didn't and perhaps this child would have died were I not to take over, like most Isekai use as an excuse. But at the end of the day, it only provides temporary solace. - Jexelld3mthReplied to Stunn691
Are you agreeing or disagreeing, I'm confused here man
So basically, I've resolved in my cowardice and pettiness to not approach Naruto myself. - Jexelld3mthReplied to david123gomez
I think people tend to confuse the meaning of the word hero in the shinobi world with the idea in our world. Heroes there are the shinobi who complete the mission, regardless of the circumstances and sacrifices. I feel that this is the idea that Kishimoto should have passed on to Itachi. He's a hero because when he was ordered by Konoha, he carried out his mission regardless of the sacrifices. That doesn't make him praiseworthy, just pathetic. A tool, a puppet. An exemplary shinobi. The system that sasuke was against at the end of the series, but was tamed by naruto
Taking a sip of the tea Eiichi prepared for him, Danzo hummed neutrally, "I see... The boy has performed more than adequately, though extremely naive and inexperienced." With mirth, Danzo gave a weak chuckle, "Though all those can be solved with sufficient conditioning and training. It's always the pacifists and naive that turn out to be the most efficient ninja. Thatboy, a prime example." Danzo uttered the last part with a hint of frustration. - Jexelld3mthCommented
how frustrating to read this mc
"Hrghh you damn..." I lose myself for a second and form a dog-looking hand sign. - Jexelld3mthReplied to Stunn691
And yet he didn't do what he did of his own free will, so meh
So basically, I've resolved in my cowardice and pettiness to not approach Naruto myself. - Jexelld3mthReplied to ferferfer2
Well, that's just semantics. It still doesn't change the fact that a total stranger has wandered into the middle of the family
Or that could be just my guilt at stealing the body of their child. I try to convince myself that I didn't and perhaps this child would have died were I not to take over, like most Isekai use as an excuse. But at the end of the day, it only provides temporary solace. - Jexelld3mthCommented
are black eyes strange?
Well, I'm not too sure myself whether that is my name. Still trying to learn the language you see. Then again, that's what my new mother called me and repeated lovingly as she stared into my eyes warmly with her onyx pair of eyes. What a strange color... - Jexelld3mthCommented
Ignorance is a blessing, until you fail because you don't know how to deal with a situation...
You know, I take great pride in my forgetfulness. Why? Well, the less you know, the fewer reasons you have to stress about life and the likely useless knowledge you've accumulated in the grand scheme of the universe. - Jexelld9mthReplied to Jexelld
If only not giving up was enough.... Naruto's situation was bad, but nowhere near AS bad when it could have been
"Of course, Naruto is a role model to me," Akabane responded. - Jexelld9mthReplied to NobodyiGuess
I don't quite remember the context of this comment, but about what you said: Yes he has always been resilient, but that is not the ONLY thing you need to succeed like he did. The biggest of his flaws is that he is dumb and impulsive, he doesn't think things through like someone of his caliber should. That's just my opinion of him, anyway
"Of course, Naruto is a role model to me," Akabane responded. - Jexelld9mthCommented
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"This is an interesting story. Because I find this amusing, I shall fifty copies of this and send it to every member of our clan." - Jexelld9mthReplied to NobodyiGuess
The truth is that he had the armor of the plot on his side, he was always just an idiot
"Of course, Naruto is a role model to me," Akabane responded. - Jexelld9mthReplied to Phillip_
Yeah, it's super fun to wake up in a kid's body in a shitty world where shit will happen and does happen all the time, and then you deliberately screw up your one advantage, knowing the future
"Is this the future?" - Jexelld9mthCommented
huh? will he write naruto manga in naruto world? That doesn't seem like a smart idea, people will see him as an oracle or something, it will draw a lot of attention and cause problems
Akabane just finished his first chapter of Naruto. He likes Naruto to the point he can roughly recreate it from memory.