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The_Zenith1dCommentedRaian will murder these Lookism guys tf, Better bring out Gitea and James to fight this lunatic! Not to mention if Yujiro found his way into all of this,
"You've got a lot of guts, Yuji!" With a figure stepping out of the car, Yuji immediately rolled his eyes. "Requesting our services like that! You think you're the bad guy?!"- The_Zenith2dCommented
What wrong with looking like a greek god author ? Lean body irl really aint all that unless your Skeleton is broad or thick/large, Then even being skinny would be alright
This was because Lin Yuan's martial path emphasized discreet and restrained absorption. If it were another evolver from a different evolutionary path who rashly absorbed so much energy, it wouldn't be surprising if their height drastically increased, and their body became as strong as an ox. Yet, Lin Yuan only appeared to be somewhat stronger. - The_Zenith2dReplied to Dark_Wiz
Or your idea of curvy is caucasian. the latina’s the arabs the desi womans the africans don’t have no plastic because thats curvy!
(In the movie adaptation of my story, LOL, Megan will be played by Penelope Cruz.) - The_Zenith2dReplied to scyfly
Oh shush, the mf billionaire is there, nothing will happen.
Before anyone could react, I gave him a punch that knocked him to the ground, although it was basically a light tap for me. - The_Zenith7dCommented
So he is getting stronger by sleeping with womans i presume ? Like Dual Cultivation but only he is getting benefits from it ???
For context, the benchmark of 100 in physical fitness was the peak Kaido of the Beasts. Darren surmised that Kaido's points would be near 90. - The_Zenith7dReplied to GreatKing05
Don’t matter, He is the mc of this fic so deal with it
by the way, people like Big mom was able to kill fully grown giants at the age of 5 to 10, so don't think that the Mc is too strong - The_Zenith14dCommented
That means this mf didn’t get no pumpum for 25 years long, Author you did him dirty
Brontes realized, perhaps he might never marry or have a romantic partner in his life, but having Vivi as his daughter filled that void, giving him a sense of family he hadn't experienced before. - The_Zenith17dCommented
I would resurrect Minato and torture and kill him in the most brutal way. Hailed as the prodigy and still couldn’t think this through.
However, Minato believed in Naruto. He felt Naruto could become the hero of the village and save it. Minato then started to perform the reaper death seal. - The_Zenith18dCommented
Like you are on to talk, MF you got the dream team of Mei except Kazuya
Four players, usually the powerhouses get one, and they are all smug. But Seidou got FOUR! - The_Zenith19dCommented
Its refreshing to see a HP ffic where Ginny ain’t banging everything that is moving but then again it is implied in the books that Ginny dated quite a few guys. So i don’t blame the authors in making Ginny a promiscuous figure.
"I've only heard about this from the girls. Ginny often wonders how it would feel to do this," Luna whispered as she gave his shaft a tentative lick. Harry smirked. - The_Zenith20dReplied to Exalted_Commoner
Would you mind telling me, what EM would do if combine with Essence of Blank and Celestial Forge ???
The internal nudges continued, each one fine-tuning his ability further. "So this is what 'Efficiency' means," he muttered to himself. His newfound power, 'Efficiency Mastery,' was fast-tracking his learning process. He felt certain there was more to it, but he was too engrossed in this exciting discovery to explore further. - The_Zenith23dCommented
I am so glad, otherwise the MC would no be special anymore
He also tried teaching observation haki to Sasuke but currently, they had no success. Maybe it has something to do with physiques as the Shinobi physique was not able to exert the power of will. - The_Zenith25dCommented
Any Fodder in One Piece is physically strong enough to destroy kage lvl shinobi’s. Imagine if Guy and Lee were born in One Piece! Them mfs would be the strongest out there
'Finally, after all these years I have completed the 100% template. I could have completed a lot earlier if only I would have awakened that damn conquerors a little earlier. It took me 12 years to awaken the king's will. And another 9 years to master the entanglement and projection attack of the conquerors and raise the power to the current level. Plus with future sight and internal destruction, and grand-master level swordsmanship, I think I can smash any Kage level Shinobi with no difficulty.' - The_Zenith27dCommented
Why are you not updating it regularly anymore Author ? Put out three chaps a day like u used to tf
"No worries. A bunch of pirates is expected to show up here," Atlas replied. "And I'm taking responsibility for rounding them all up right here!" - The_Zenith28dCommented
Can we expect a chapter everyday ?
I rushed this backstory because i want to progress the plot. - The_Zenith28dCommented
Author, If you need financial motivation to write this fic further, I will happily donate and join the patreon !!!
👉 patreon.com/ChaosWriter; - The_Zenith28dCommented
Author, why are you not continuing this fine masterpiece ???
A/N: A new One Piece Fanfic. Wohooo~~!!! - The_Zenith30dCommented
Its not that we lost interest, we are just waiting on the story progessing towards Ant arc. Imo when the story progesses towards MC battling the likes of Lucifer, Mereum, Netero or venturing towards the Dark Continent, thats when your going to see your story blowing up like your knk ffic. Trust me, When it comes to writing skills, Your up there at the top 3 on this platform.
But, considering most of you seemed to have lost interest... - The_Zenith1mthCommented
Yeah, you definitely did!
My third fight scene, did i improve?