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Daoist6163901yrCommentedThis feels rushed. It's like the writer doesn't know how to end the story and is giving us time skips and summaries. Are we going to get a summary of what happened between Di Tianmo and Xing Wudi too? that'll be too bad. Whenever I read stories that start well and end in an unsatisfactory manner, I'm reminded once more of the importance of editors/beta readers; they provide a third party's perspective of the story/writing as a whole, helping point out plot holes and redundant chapters.
Ch 1181 Time Flies- Daoist6163901yrCommentedCh 481 The End
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Maybe it's more compatible with earthlings. These aliens are also human(homo sapien), just from different and more technologically advanced planets.
On the screen, Hei Nan rubbed his palms with anxiety and said, "Chief, the Purple Jade is a kind of a super gene optimization fluid invented by the top-notch scientist Harris 13 years ago. It is said that he spent 60 years of hard work to research this gene optimization fluid. But during the experiment, all 179 individuals, who participated in the experiment and had consumed the Purple Jade gene optimization fluid, had died! Harris had also fled as he feared being punished. These aren't gene optimization fluids anymore and are simply the most lethal poison!" - Daoist6163902yrCommentedCh 8 Showing Off His Wealth!
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Just get on with it already!đ I resumed reading this book a few weeks ago,(had 511 chapters to binge read) and now that I've caught up, I'm getting frustrated at the daily chapters and their content. There's just too much unnecessary chatter before a fight.
Ch 2344 Swollen Face (1) - Daoist6163902yrCommented
This chapter was disappointing. She's powerful but, this is no man's land, where are the guns? no matter how incompetent these guys are, one person should have gotten a hit in, right? oh and the briefcase, shouldn't there be at least a biometric lock for something containing diamond ores?đ
Ch 536 Chapter 536: Be Careful Our Fists Don't Have Eyes - Daoist6163902yrCommentedCh 1 Unexpected Transmigration Into A Book
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All the pieces of his soul that he recovered and merged with have been influenced, in one way or the other, by yunyan. By the time he recovers the rest of the pieces, will he still feel the same way about his "revenge"?
The man laughed as he flicked his sleeve. There were still plenty of worlds until he gained his full power, when that happens, he will settle his debt with Yunyu. - Daoist6163902yrCommented
I just thought of Terminator.
He did not know that if he continued to ask, he would hear the story of a robot developing a free will, pursuing liberation, and almost eventually almost subverting humanity. - Daoist6163902yrCommented
why would he do that?
In the end, it was Master Song who avenged Yun Qin and buried Yun Qin's family properly. - Daoist6163902yrCommented
Don't have any means of getting money?How about getting a job?
"Now, my prospective marriage is ruined, and I don't have any means to get money. If my mom learned about how much money I owe, she'd definitely yell at me until I went deaf!" - Daoist6163902yrCommented
erm,...... I think there might be a translation error here?
Not good! Godfather held the triangular blade and felt a problem. - Daoist6163902yrReplied to ChrysenthiumCh 1481 Chosen By God