DarkElven6
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DarkElven66dReplied to BrezerThank you for the review and honest commentary. While I know this isn't everyone's cup of tea, I wanted to showcase the very real emotions of PTSD and valid trauma response of the character Kai. In the beginning I was afraid no one would give it a fair try knowing the MC was a female. So that is why there are very few descriptors. Thank you for giving TTIWS a try. I appreciate any and all feedback.
- DarkElven66dReplied to BrezerCh 16 Escape and Sorrow
- DarkElven62mthReplied to Mikaela_Risner
In my mind, they didn't want to dirty the dress and she just had the underclothes on.
She turned around and blinked back tears. She didn't need the maids to scold her again for ruining her makeup. - DarkElven63mthReplied to darkblade875Ch 26 The Potion Maker
- DarkElven63mthReplied to darkblade875Ch 1 Beginning
- DarkElven63mthReplied to darkblade875Ch 22 New Equipment
- DarkElven64mthReplied to DarkElven6
That would make sense, but Lucas’ village is secluded from the rest of the villages of the elven race. Think of super religious people with strict rules. They create their own insular societies and cut off the rest of the world. #spoilers.
The vendor held up their hands. Fifty bronze was a cheap price for an enchanted piece. Thinking he wouldn't find a better deal, he handed the coins over. - DarkElven64mthReplied to Artemius
In the villages that still upheld the traditions of old. Lucas was taught how to handle money by his warrior master. So he understands how money works. He also needed to travel a lot for his training. As you read on you will find a more suitable background for that information..
The vendor held up their hands. Fifty bronze was a cheap price for an enchanted piece. Thinking he wouldn't find a better deal, he handed the coins over. - DarkElven66mthCommentedCh 1 Chapter 01: StarHaven
- DarkElven66mthReplied to Raela_The_Echo
Adorable!!!! To be honest the bunny makes me feel better too.
The bunny in her arms leaped up and stared at her. Eva felt the loss of warmth in her arms and tried to pick up the rabbit one more time. However, the rabbit had other plans and ran away. - DarkElven66mthReplied to ExQuartz_Roachina
Thank you! Another casualty of a slow keyboard.
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- DarkElven66mthReplied to Raela_The_EchoCh 1 Father's Decision
- DarkElven66mthReplied to Raela_The_Echo
I will work to commit to a better release schedule then. I went out to buy a new laptop for this purpose. Thank you for reading my novel to the point that this is necessary.
It was at this time that a great many other spirits decided to observe the two mortals. It was in their nature to observe interesting things. A great spirit taking interest in two mortals made them very interesting. - DarkElven66mthReplied to Raela_The_EchoCh 138 High Mana Zones?
- DarkElven66mthReplied to justxforxfun
wow, I can't believe both I and panda missed this
This paragraph has been deleted. - DarkElven66mthReplied to justxforxfun
well it wouldn't be fun to read otherwise : )
Eva raised the ornamental sword, but the men laughed as they ganged up on her. Soon the sword was sent flying off in the direction she had come from and they captured her. Eva felt tears rise to her eyes as she realized it was all useless. - DarkElven66mthReplied to justxforxfun
To be fair an elf like Lucas would think all humans as weak.
She had not shown him her good side once. In fact, he probably thought she was just a weak human who constantly needed protection and guidance.