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“For a sprinter, the bastard literally has a healing factor or super-improved lung capacity, otherwise. How do you expect a sprinter to be able to run at Mach 20 or at the speed of light while the oxygen is completely behind its speed? Remember to exceed the speed of sound and even light implies entering a vacuum environment. What it means that sprinters basically don't breathe every time they run but sustain with the Speed Force as their livelihood energy” he said.
“Marine Killer”
Double chapter? I knew you still loved me author.
Writing has the basics of storytelling down, however overall lacks direction and creativity. Includes the addition of a system which is quite mundane. The main character lacks any unique qualities, just an average pervert. I acknowledge the author for picking up the pen for a story about Pokémon as there are not much deviations one can make from the main story. This story however isn’t worth being continued on the basis of it corrupt concept of mind control into the formation of a broken minded harem. I’d recommend newer fanfic writers to start with a intriguing idea and aversion towards multiple female leads as it’s hard to get the characters right without experience. This story is better left to be found on AO3z
Mate how tf was I supposed interpret that’s what you meant? You commented on a paragraph purely talking about his looks; it says ”flawless skin”, so I thought you meant it was Chinese inspired because they usually describe their mc’s as having “flawless translucent jade like skin”.
There’s was a social activist with the name Wilma Mankiller, so who knows lol
Woah Sam, appetizing? That’s a child you’re talking about.
Let alone crippled, he needs to be castrated.
Because there is a handsome Mc apparently
I knew you took some inspiration from Lol
When’s the foreplay coming?
This is like the mindset of Rhaast from LoL.
There is a Celestial Dragon amongst our midst
Thanks for giving me some of the differences. I only related them because the both have green projections haha. Mysterion is doing a good job with the novel, so he will get rid of the finger cross debuff later in.
Should probably be Gold Roger, since that’s what the public knows him as