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Emma_Fanning

Emma_Fanning

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2019-11-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • Emma_Fanning
    Emma_Fanning3yr
    Commented

    Will there be silverware at the table? Will she try to grab a knife and Slide it up her sleeve?

    Ch 6 The Devil Is Suddenly Hungry
    The Cursed Prince
    Fantasy · Missrealitybites
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  • Emma_Fanning
    Emma_Fanning3yr
    Commented

    Dont have her guess that shes special too early. Maybe dont reveal ghe prince’s curse too early either. add suspense.

    Ch 5 So, The Devil Is... Gay?
    The Cursed Prince
    Fantasy · Missrealitybites
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  • Emma_Fanning
    Emma_Fanning3yr
    Commented

    Add more description of the surroundings. It will help readers Visualize your story. Add more depth and maybe some flashbacks to the fl’s story.

    Ch 2 You Will Be The Mother Of My Children
    The Cursed Prince
    Fantasy · Missrealitybites
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  • Emma_Fanning
    Emma_Fanning3yr
    Posted

    I really like how this story has developed. There have been quite a lot of plot twists i wasnt expecting. i am excited to see how it tirns out and who Bai ends up with.

    Beauty and the Beasts
    · Webnovel Comics
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  • Emma_Fanning
    Emma_Fanning3yr
    Posted

    Im loving this story so far!!! I love the characters and the development of the plot. Very twisty! I am excited to see what happens. I hqve seen many ads for this comic and look foreward to what ive seen.

    Beauty and the Beasts
    · Webnovel Comics
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