They live in a prime example of a dystopian society

so, with the right melody, this could actually sound good. like i tried it, and it worked to some degree...

lightning is not the onl way here it seems

this person basicly got himself a second personality, that deals with this world, because the first one couldnt take it. this is very intresting psychologicaly. Good way to show the traumaresponse of his mind to the situation.

I mean, it would be possible if you consoder the spire an energy source. The 2nd law of thermodynamic just states that energy cant go from a less energetoc to a higher energetic thing on its own. Consider the spire the reason and your good.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

and it shows, that as with Gravis, your goals might change on the way. That you want sometjing completly else, when your story is at its end. I love it. tears. tears of joy

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

This is THE perfect ending. i loved yoir story, feom start to finish. Ups, Downs, all challenges, the developments, plottwists, characters, and power/law systems. The ending was uniwue, but feels like a fullfilling conclusion. This was a story about development, a journey through the many worlds, and in the end, Gravis became truly free. just great.

yess, finally a healthy relationship

I need more, this parts just soooo good!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Tbh this is one of the most creative and just outright beaitiful depictions of undead in all of fantasy. I want more, keep it up!!!

todays chapter, 666, the number of the beast(Gravis?)

so DRAMATIC! have to love it.... but that cliff...

yaay 500 chapters, thanks for all the hard work

you dont know how right you are, red king... probably

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cant wait for her awakening, shes gonna be a frckn beast (not literally, thats Loths job...)

and i think with his character, Liths gonna get that title first ... Sorry Manohar