Daoist_Slade64
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Doesn't he have lapis eyes
Disney seems to make everything they buy worse than when they bought it.
*missle bombardments
Did you'll forget that the beginning of the novel starts with him not wanting to live anymore?
You are being redundant. Just say, "A feminine voice scoffed in reply/as she replied:" Then add what you want her to say in the next paragraph. I've noticed that you kept describing what you want them to say and then having them say it.
*no longer vibrant
To be fair to the author, until I see proof that he's read such stories, he probably doesn't even know there's a whole nother word hor such.
I mean, he IS a NEUTRAL God, so maybe tofu?
*take long