suketu_shah
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Nice easy going novel with a balance of all first of all writing quality is great and stabality of update is 1 chapter per day and till now it seem it hadn't taken a break well about story development I guess its a bit slow and mysterious as many of the finner details are missing a bit such as about blue Phoenix well it in itself add bit of charm
Well this novel is a bit naive and childish (slice of life )urban novel with system and everything in story revolve around protagonist doing thing and face slapping. I hope writer can change some system setting such as God level reward as because of it story won't be any long lasting start from beginners to God level and add some antagonist in the story who can compete with protagonist
I think this novel has a great potential with good translation quality and updatinh status but if I want to find fault then I call only tell about character design as it is a bit vague and hard to imagine how character looks and about world setting it seems there is no details about it except era and place