Tonks should be a doppelganger that can freely change her form. like from Overlord.

The one thing I always hated about this series was everones aversion to killing. The police, the government... There is no way to win a war where one side kills and the other does not.

Yeah meliodas has been fighting for like 10,000 years. There shouldnt be any mortal alive that can even touch him. His sheer experiece should let him curb stomp anyone instantly.

Soul land!!!!!!!!

True

Seriously, Lupin was just a whiny coward. He abanded Harry, Serius, and his wife and son all because he couldn’t cope with a medical condition. I have always hated Lupin as a character. In fact feel free to kill him off as soon as possible.

I agree 100%! I never liked her perverted personality, She would definitely be looked down on and hated by those victorian traditionalist wizards and witches. They all wear full length robes their whole lives, not to mention even regular english people are quite prudish. In my opinion she should never have been allowed to follow him to other worlds because her base personality and nature are a liability in other worlds. Please let her character be static and grow a bit. Its fine for to be that perverted in private moments but as the head of an ancient noble house she must conform with the traditions and ideals of their world, especially on the political side of things.

I say bleach.

No no no... Harry has his issues for sure but his current greatest fear is his friends betraying and leaving him. I don’t know if you can really imagine what it’s like to be truely alone, to have no friends no family, nobody to anchor you to the world. He must have ties to the world or he will just burn everything like Tom. I think Author-San should let him discover a way to detect mind manipulation and cure it to increase his allies. Hermione was always unbending in her loyalties, and cherished her friends over everything, I really think she was manipulated by that old goat. Give the girl some credit. I also think he is a little too wrapped up in his revenge against the potters. he never even confirmed they were guilty and just started trying to destroy them. Obviously poor James got mind raped as well, Its not really his fault. and lilly obviously sacraficed her love for Harry to save Marcus. She’s not really at fault either. its all dumbles. Personally i would contact Rita and get her to write her book. He has to make everyone lose faith in dumbo. Nothing like outing him as the old gay lover of grindewald who murdered his little sister. Anyway my point is that it isnt odd for him to have a whipped relationship with luna, what man in a relationship isnt a little whipped. As for the Weasly twins, they are not his cronies but his partners. they are the public face while he is more research and idea guy. That’s a partnership. anyway im tired now, love the story. good night all.

I love this novel and it has become one of my favorite fan fictions. The writing has improved remarkably the more the author has written. I hope some of the characters can be a little less perverted in the future. I am not against harem or sexuality but i cant stand characters who lack etiquette and scream *** constantly from the rooftops. I actually knew somebody like that in my university and i couldn’t stand to be around the guy. It’s the reason i always dropped Highschool DxD, Even though the story and plot was decent it was destroyed by the protagonists perverted nature, I just don’t want to see that happen to this story. Anyway once again i love the story and hope you continue writing it for many years to come.

Yes tonks! And Hermione,he has to save them from their terrible fates of ending up with Ron and lupin. I always hated both, especially Lupin.

If i could offer a bit of constructive feedback, when multiple people are speaking to each other it gets very difficult to tell who is saying what, breaking the flow of the story. Otherwise I like the characters and story. Just maybe find a way to clarify who is saying what. I thank you for your time and efforts.

Your chapters are really short. I feel like I waited a week just to see the MC have a uselessly short nonsensical argument with a girl who has no common sense. If I have to wait so long for a new chapter to be posted at least give me something to chew before I copletely lose intrest as a reader.I am a fan and like the general theme of the story. I just feel it needs to be fluffed out a bit more in each chapter to give a greater sense of plot and character development.

Yeah i agree. but its the same cliffhanger twice. sigh... Actually it probably wouldn’t have bothered me if i didn’t have to wait three days just to confirm my suspicions. Still, great story author-samma.

You still left the name a cliffhanger huh. thats just wrong.