No it’s not… any good OP story doesn’t need the MC to brag and constantly state how much more powerful they are than everything and everyone around them. That would get old REALLY quickly. Just Imagine if Lebron James, or Micheal Jordan, suddenly went to a children’s basketball game and started talking about how much more amazing they were compared to all the kids surrounding them? It would make them look vain and petty and no one wants to see that. What Phenex is doing isn’t too different.

That’s a tough question. The One Piece world has some really powerful individuals and a lot of people underestimate just how strong they can be. I’m using the MCU version as a benchmanrk, but In my mind, when on land, Namor would be around Rear Admiral Level, but below a typical Vice Admiral. Meaning he’d be roughly as strong as Luffy right before the time skip.

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😅 Both Ace and Luffy crash right after setting sail, any treasure given to them would only find its way to the sea floor.

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That’s exactly what he’s going to do.

Celestial Dragons don’t have that power. They can at most summon an admiral, but he’ll be long gone by then. If they could summon a buster call, they would have summoned one to the Sabaody Archipelago after the whole Charlos incident.

No they can’t. They can call an admiral at most. A buster call is something far more specific. Otherwise a buster call would have been summoned to the Sabaody Archipelago after Luffy decked Charlos.

That’ not how buster calls work. The most a single world noble can do is call in an admiral.

That’s not how buster calls work.

The physiology of Namor, the Sub-Mariner, from Marvel comics. Guy is basically Aquaman with wings.

It’s not like he’s going to stay permanently. Besides it’s the fastest way for him to get stronger.

I originally had him set sail at 17, but I changed it after thinking it over. He will leave with the Revolutionaries to train for a few years before leaving when he is 15. Meaning 4 years before Ace sets sail and 7 years before Luffy does. Giving him plenty of time to explore while preparing for future events.

This was the globe in Ohara showing the Blue Sea world

There’s no need to be rude. Insulting another’s intelligence just because you don’t enjoy the way they’ve written their story is pathetic. If you don’t like it say what you don’t like so others might avoid it, give the author constructive feedback so the story can improve, or sit down and shut up.

Not true. Aquaman is definitely bullet proof. He also stood his ground agaisnt Superman and Wonder Woman on separate occasions. He is faster than Superman when he is underwater and has access to Atlantean magic which augments his abilites. So he’s no slouch. But the whole whose stronger thing doesn’t really matter. The winner would depend on whose writing them and who they think would win.

Death Battle has been wrong before. They even admitted it. But I only did about two minutes of research on both characters so it doesn’t really matter whose stronger. Namor can fly, so for this novel he’s the better choice since it opens up more options for my main character in his travels.

He may get a transformation later on. But I haven’t exactly decided on it as of yet.

He used his power to remove the water from his body, effectively drying himself off.