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Kaz05mthCommentedwe can work through reading the flowery word but please change the way they communicate coz no one speaks like this. I enjoy reading the book but its getting cringy
With an authoritative voice that echoed through the clearing, Orion addressed Jackson, his words heavy with consequence. "Submit, Jackson," he commanded, his voice carrying a mixture of unwavering authority and a touch of mercy. "Your insolence has met its end. Accept the consequences of your actions and acknowledge my dominion."- Kaz07mthCommented
a bit of a reach but still works, Logically top 50 is the right estimation coz u can't say she is as strong as Kaiden
She might be close to the level of the Top 10 themselves!! - Kaz09mthCommented"Eli is practically creaming his pants," C-Jay pointed to the last-ranked trainee.
- Kaz011mthCommented
there goes any possibility of him becoming true alpha, may I ask y the change?
Scott on the other hand was covered in blood as his claws tore through the flesh of the Hunter fighting against him. - Kaz01yrCommented"Because if I were my uncle, I'd chance you a thousand times over."
- Kaz01yrCommented
from all the inbreeding🤣
All the nobles and other people inside the auctions house's eyes widened more than theirs. After all, they don't expected the silver haired person to be another tenryuubito as Lucius don't wear the signature celestial dragon's suit and he don't even looks like a celestial dragon since they all know the celestial dragons are ugly as fuck. - Kaz01yrCommented
debruyne and Halaand type duo
Nathan got called the sniper, rightfully so, during those 2 months he honed his passing to a point where he became the center of every offense, he'd run to the side and deliver a very precise pass to the person who had the less people guarding him. - Kaz01yrCommentedNathan got called the sniper, rightfully so, during those 2 months he honed his passing to a point where he became the center of every offense, he'd run to the side and deliver a very precise pass to the person who had the less people guarding him.
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silverwing is defo not big he got one shot by verthimor
Rhaenyra's knees almost gave up, staring at the scenery with fear in her eyes. Three grown dragons, the size of mountains. The most powerful ones of all. - Kaz01yrCommented
this line is from designated survivor
"Look, doctor, I promise you I will do everything I can to take it easy," Alexander assured. "Besides, last time I checked, I think I outrank you." - Kaz01yrReplied to DefinitelyNotACat
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Recalling the name he had given the cat in the past, Ohta adopted a smile and asked, "Enjoying a sunbath, Susu?" He was more of a dog person, but this particular cat had seemingly been stalking him since he was in middle school. He wasn't absolutely sure it was the same cat, but no other feline gave him the same, almost foreboding impression. - Kaz01yrPosted
Hey so I just finished the Tokyo revengers manga and I've been looking for a decent TR ff, the first chapter is very good, interesting approach and not just some transmigration. I'm really looking forward to more chapters, it has a lot of promise. a few grammatical errors but shouldn't be too much of a problem.
- Kaz01yrPosted
Seriously, I was originally excited but all of this is just basically a whitewashed version of G.O.A.T, no shade but the lack of originality and the fact that ur not even trying to add ur own twist to ur work is just sad. Even the first elixirs he got is the same as the other novel. I hope ur new chapters won't be more copy pasted/paraphrased stuff.