Typo "Well if we don't while.." should be Well if we don't die while..

hmm, the plan could be something about representing the planet in higher level tournament?

typo that will soon or later should be that will sooner or later

typo Alin's should be Alvin's

typo burst out of the. should be burst out of it?

good thing Linfel isn't a cat. otherwise we know what curiosity did to a cat.

typo: Linfel and Linfel one should be Linfelia

I really like the dynamic between familiars and their humans , and this already shows huge fights for the future with the "dead" familiars.

jump jump jump!!!

Normal people grind their faction reputation points over years with hard work. and then comes Fang Heng along with his "hard" evening work...

typo: skull should be school or university?

I like the world building that has been happening in the last couple of chapters.

typo: Mas should be master

or perhaps he really did not understand anything. aaah next chapter will be glorious.

typo: sheered should be cheered

Now this was a good ending.

Typo: Should be Alvin not Simon

No. no comment farming. There weren't a LOL moment to warrant a comment.

When I'm writing this review the book has just started. But the humor is great and the small development they currently has happened is promising for future.

Will spam the comments with the fact that i love this humor.