Book has a nice concept and well defined characters, although I believe it begins in a rather confusing way since names of characters and actions are thrown out like it is a second season instead of the first, it is rather easy to understand afterwards. My only advice would be to be careful with commas, paragraph length and also the usage of uppercase.

Bro am actually thinking of something with them, it is kinda sad to leave them like that xD

Full Form

FMC

4th Sister

Full Form

3rd Sister

Eldest Sister

MC

Honest self review here, story is your cliche harem story but the story not so cliche. MC is Alastor Von Fargas (Daniel Evans) a Vampire with an system of unknown origin. FMC is Zaforia Von Fargas (Demon Empress of the Ghostly Lands) Zaforia summons MC from his world to hers and he’s her fifth servant together with some other four noble ladies of different species. Alastor due to unprecedented circumstances ends up becoming her fiancé and therefore he now has two commitments, become stronger to be qualified to marry the Empress and also… help her manage her territory, an odd domain to say the least.