I figured I would give this a go since it was free for the day, and I have had a hard time putting it down! I will be a bit of a pain in the butt and mention perhaps having another proof reader before posting, but errors are few and far between. (Please don't hate me) I only bring that up because I have a difficult time getting into stories with too many, however you have definitely got me hooked! I cannot wait to see how everything pans out :) I would definitely buy this if it went to print!