This was just annoying with the webnovel references all the time. Its been imcreasing lately but this chapter was like 4 times or something, and now you just made it canon that the internet and phones exist in this story just because you wanted to plug your other novel... Another complaint I have in general is that it takes too much time to get anywhere whenever the whole family is together, because you insist on having everyone speak instead of abbreviating it with just a few. Seriously there is no need to hear from each of her 40 or something family members each time they talk about something, because just that stretches it out to like two chapters with nothing else happening. I know its important with them all getting to godhood but I really hope you dont take as long as this with the rest or it will take like 25-30 more chapters just to evolve everyone. I want the fight to happen.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I would just exchange 1 million primordial essence out of the 8 billion she has for 20 million skill points and get all classes and subclasses, even after fusing them she would afford it probably. Or am i missing something where she cant do that or that would be bad somehow?

While i appreciate her failing for once, and figured at least zudig would survive because of davids friends you set up as training to rescue him, i still kinda hoped they at least the other two would die. Kireina simply has too much to do and too many enemies, and if the fights and setup for the fights will all take as long as they did for this fight then we will still be stuck in Vida for another 500 chapters lol Really love this story and world and would just love some more emphasis on plot progression in the future and maybe condense the fights and monster farming a bit and i would love it even more

Aren’t the chapter titles 1 chapter early or something? Nothing about going to Maeralya’s divine realm in this chapter, and a few chapters ago the same thing happened when the chapter title was about the chaos realm. Have the chapter titles been displaced one step back at some point maybe?

Am i missing something or did you mean one trillion exp? Maybe im stupid

Seemingly no main purpose for the main character other than getting stronger to survive and not get bullied. Side characters are just not that interesting other than maybe Layla, while I just hope Peter gets killed off soon. I have read about 170+ chapters so far and for now I will drop it but maybe return in the future. The story is just not very engaging imho and the characters, especially the main character is not very interesting. He is also not very smart which is a turn off for me in a story. Overall not a bad story but not especially good either, just average. Recommended if you are bored with nothing else to do or read.

Um... 3 per day for the first half of the month was supposed to put you back on track with the chapters... how does it make sense that you are still as far behind now as you were at the end of august when you clearly did not meet that goal? I understand if you have rl circumstances but just stop with the lying and excuses and especially promises. At this point whenever you make a promise its more likely you wont keep it than that you will, and the more promises you break the more people are going to get turned off from continuing to follow you. Personally I just see it as either background noise or as a meme at this point and expect random chapter releases, but new readers probably wont be so patient.

Really could use a better editor. I’m assuming when lith asked the incredibly stupid question of Do you have a cure? he probably meant Are you close to a cure? or similar. Lots of other mistakes lately with grammar and seemingly missing dialogue and stuff like that.