Also you're writing is terrific, I hope you keep going.

Thanks for the chapter

The man is fighting monsters, large creatures. This skill suggests he can launch large projectiles, one with a pointed edge, capable of impaling creatures of massive size (after all something doesn't need to have a sharp edge but a sharp point to pierce something, imagine a bullet which is round on the body except for its pointy top). And if you think about it which sounds better puny arrows or what you could consider tank ammunition (I don't know what tanks use, missiles?). Though this is a world of magic so I guess anything can go. Cheers :D

Hope you feel better and take your time :)

please tell me this will be continued

He's not dense, his trait is unyielding. Which is a good trait (though I like dense mcs just as much).

I like the plot, the characters, the pacing of the story. All of it. Love the mc.

I wouldn't say 'quite' young but yeah he is still in his prime.

I apologize if I seemed hostile at first, it's hard to express the correct emotion using only text. I try not to make people feel down when I make disagreements, it makes me feel terrible. Anyways it was fun banter on my part, have a nice day and I hope you enjoy the story.

P.S. know my intentions are not to rile you up. Just trying to present to you my perspective on things. I'm no English major, so the thing about authors and such you can also take with a hint of salt, it's just my outlook. P.P.S. I currently have lots of time on my hands, that's why I could write that essay from my previous message. Happy Reading :D

Alright, let's say there is an issue with the author being unnecessarily repetitive. Bring it up with the author through the reviews and if he changes it to your liking, then Hurrah. If not then just read the story as is, as I mentioned previously anyone can write a story. In other words, it's best to go into a story with little to no expectations. Now onto my next point, when an author is being repetitive in a story it is to remind the reader throughout the story. Usually, the authors keep the explanation brief. Now I'm not sure if the author of this novel is proficient in English ( I haven't read this novel in a while ) but try to understand informed readers can continue the story with less confusion/misconceptions. Now to the next point, the system does not necessarily have to be formal/stiff. The system provides descriptions, in descriptions you can find: lore, witty remarks, etc. Go to google images and type 'legend of Zelda item description' which should show an image of an armored Carp, if you read the description you'll know what I mean. Next point, why did I mention the last sentence despite you not mentioning the last sentence? Well, I was trying to prove my point. Where the description is fine as is. I'm going to be brutally honest, your description was no different than the original. Also, either one is grammatically correct, so there is no need to change it. Anyway, enjoy the story :)

This isn't over explanation, it's lore. Plus the last sentence explains how to improve the flame. Another thing to note, is that this part of the passage involves the system. So that might be why you're interpreting it as stiff dialogue, which is really just a description.

Well that explains alot, thank you for taking the time to explain. I really didn't know and thought the person was genuinely confused, so I thought I could help explain. Thanks again and I apologize to OP for the misunderstanding :)

That's...not a joke. Also, I'm expressing goodwill, I apologize if it came out as hostile.