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Sailova_Sailo

Sailova_Sailo

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2019-11-03 JoinedGlobal
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo10d
    Commented

    droped. po is the only one for me

    "Nooooo!!~" The Panda complained in sadness as he missed an opportunity to see who was about to be chosen as the Dragon Warrior. Unknown to him, he just lost something more than just that.
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    Chronicles of the Multiversal Wanderer
    Movies · SlimeSage
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo10d
    Replied to Tio_Iroh99

    absolutely love your view. fanfic should take the grand scheme of the universe and find a way to fit their character in that universe not the other way around

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    DC: Spirit of Vengeance
    Anime & Comics · Tio_Iroh99
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo17d
    Commented

    author you are very good at bringing out the humanity in him. also very good at telling stories

    Well, Hunter is something inhuman; I've been trying to convey that image since the first chapter, but the little humanity left in him is something he tries to preserve, hence scenes like this one...
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    Fate/The Hunter and His Doll
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo17d
    Commented

    A slice of life is a must for a good novel. makes the character more alive . sometimes plot progression has to take the back seat

    Ch 359 Last Night at Kaer Morhen
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    The Witcher: The Divine Hunter
    Video Games · Leohart
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo22d
    Commented

    good story but world building is minimal. we don't know what era. size of town/city/village he is in . The church hierarchy. the background of the world

    Ch 16 Ichi
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    Jauary John
    Fantasy · minatoflash
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo22d
    Commented

    and here i think shes not emotional enough for the situation she was in.

    John smiled at her. Maria was excited enough to forget everything that happened there. She was only thinking about giving Donna something to eat. She quickly ran downstairs. John walked towards Donna and asked her,
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    Jauary John
    Fantasy · minatoflash
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo22d
    Commented

    i think you should change from ghost to spirit. then add suffix of evil or good or holy etc.

    -"I don't know how you become this much stronger. But you just wait till the day the people who you think of as alleys turn enemies. Beware of the ones around you."
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    Jauary John
    Fantasy · minatoflash
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo23d
    Commented

    👏

    I write this story with a purpose, though I'm unsure how much it will be fulfilled. I aspire to change the world with my story. I know it may seem like a childish wish, but can't we all wish for something better?
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    Jauary John
    Fantasy · minatoflash
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo23d
    Replied to A_Real_Werewolf234

    all im saying is you need more info dump for the change. like add the mentality of the normal Custodian and it will also be more understandable for non 40k fans. chinese mc was just a reference 🤣🤣 for quick change.

    Ch 2 Mars
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo23d
    Commented

    inner peace inner peace .. ... .. dinner please dinner please dinner with peas !!!! what

    I went to an inn and booked a room for a night. I immediately went into my room and mediated to process my thoughts better.
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    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Movies · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo23d
    Commented

    good overall but author you missed something. the change in mentality what caused it why it happened it should be stated in the writing not to be guessed by the reader. Going from normal person to Chinese MC personality should be explained

    Ch 2 Mars
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo23d
    Commented

    could get the psyker power but not the level of god emperor. he should have got the Primearc body instead

    One of his plans was to draw out the strength of the Emperor's blood that was used to make every Custodes. If he could have the Psychic Might of the Emperor of Mankind on top of his Sacred Gears he would become a big player plenty quickly. 
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    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo25d
    Commented

    GUY is the perfect guy with out his eye brows and green jumpsuit . but he is not Might Guy without those

    'Be like Guy–sensei, but without ultra bushy eyebrows and weird clothes'
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    One Piece - Thorny Path To Freedom
    Anime & Comics · Meralman
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo27d
    Commented

    same mistake as i did . he can absorb any kind of energy

    Sebastian possessed the "Energy Absorption and Release" ability, enabling him to absorb physical and energy attacks as long as they didn't exceed his limit.
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    Marvel: The Gene Collector
    Movies · Midnight_Wonder
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo28d
    Posted

    the story is like a puzzle with a few pieces missing . the transition of sean and ark is a bit in coherent

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    Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
    Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo28d
    Posted

    characters are not themselves its hard to be immersed in the story .

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    Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
    Movies · Story_Teller_229
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo28d
    Commented

    nope can't find them all with only one person. hydra does not mean evil. some are evil some just exist as puppet due to brain washing. so haki cannot sense brainwashed

    If HYDRA were to attempt an overthrow of SHIELD, similar to what happened in the movie 'Captain America: The Winter Soldier' a few years from now, John would have become even stronger by then and would possess the capability to resist and eliminate HYDRA on his own.
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    Unleashing Marvelous Might: Whitebeard's Abilities in Marvel Universe
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo29d
    Commented

    author starting with king in black ark . are you going to follow the normal ark progression of 616

    A/N Yeah, this happened in daredevil comics, and yes, its a symbiote invasions.
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    Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
    Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo29d
    Replied to God_Of_Null

    no free symbiot cos of null invasion . instant death for those bonded

    A/N Yeah, this happened in daredevil comics, and yes, its a symbiote invasions.
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    Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
    Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
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  • Sailova_Sailo
    Sailova_Sailo29d
    Commented

    is it Ai generated. the writing style seems like it. but still above average

    Ch 1 "a messed up world" (chapter 1)
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    Marvel-Comics: Overgeared
    Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali
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