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Vanbun

Vanbun

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“The only thing that is beautiful as it disappears is the sun.The only thing that is beautiful to lose is in love.”-hospital ship

2019-11-02 JoinedUnited States
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    Felt like it hasn’t end… it seem like it’s missing something still

    Ch 3588 The End
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    The Long-awaited Mr Han
    Urban · As If Dawn
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    This couple move fast! why does it feel like the author is just trying to wrap up everything and not rrally going into detail…

    Ch 3557 Untitled
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    The Long-awaited Mr Han
    Urban · As If Dawn
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Robbery
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    Wife Doting Addiction:My Abducted Tsundere Husband
    History · Shi Er Yue
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Posted

    Another unfinish story that said complete…. Will they ever complete this comic

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    My Terrifying Imperial Consort
    · ShaHua x Momo
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    Lol he gave a a definition

    Ch 36 Foreplay
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    Hellbound With You
    Fantasy · KazzenlX
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Posted

    The story started out very interesting and it kept me hook for while then I kinda drop it cuz the FL and ML is lacking too much communication and it was just the same problem over and over. Eventually the story start developing and you do see the growth of the chacrcter but it was still lacking. The story got stretch out so much that there was no actual complete/ consequences of the problem that the character was dealing with. for instance; 1.what happen to Gu Jingze’s dad after he return to the family? What did he start doing? Or when he suddenly start missing and Gu jingze went to go look for him and return without him? 2.how did the couple deal with xue mengqi after the incident? 3. All the other couple need more story development and how their feeling started to grow 4. Why did they yun family hated the Gu family so much that they plot from so early on yet they want their daughter to married into the Gu family? That doesn’ make sense 5. How did Lin Che’s mother even end up with the Lin family? And when she came back she didn’t even go visit her mother til her funeral. Overall it was interesting but story development is lacking.. the ending felt so rush with a few chapters of each couple and not the overall ending.

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    The Beautiful Wife of the Whirlwind Marriage
    Urban · Bath Robey
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to Mae_Elvinia

    Yes it’s in the app as Genius doctor black belly miss

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    Peerless Doctor: The Scheming Lady
    · FanCiYuan Culture
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to Vanbun

    Yes it’s in the app under the Genius Doctor black belly miss :)

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    Peerless Doctor: The Scheming Lady
    · FanCiYuan Culture
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Posted

    The overview sound interesting but I as read more it just get boring and no development. I actully got up to chapter 520 before I call it quits even though I did jump a few chapter as well. The storyline Is a bit unrealistic since the FL is so innocent and naive yet the grandpa see the potential in her and know that she would be prefect for his grandson and force them to get married. For a cold ceo the ML is a bit naive too, he said he had eye on her from the start but was indifference since ge already has a gf during the time. The more I read the more I see that this story was stretch out so much. The author try to add to many plot and idea to it to keep it cute and sweet whole using a typical theme but wanted it to be different somehow, yet it lack character and plot development. it’ll be nicer if the author can go in depth about the FL work itself and be more descriptive about the design and setting. It need better transition flow from one problem to the next. Overall it’s a potential novel but definitely need to editing work

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    The Hidden Wife Of The Cold CEO
    Urban · Paschalinelily
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Robbery
    altalt
    Wife Doting Addiction:My Abducted Tsundere Husband
    History · Shi Er Yue
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Robbery
    altalt
    Wife Doting Addiction:My Abducted Tsundere Husband
    History · Shi Er Yue
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Robbery
    altalt
    Wife Doting Addiction:My Abducted Tsundere Husband
    History · Shi Er Yue
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    sneaky family!

    Ch 99 Old Lady Yan Hoped That Yan Ningbai Would Be Intelligent Enough
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to fictiophiliastruck

    lol yes

    Ch 99 Old Lady Yan Hoped That Yan Ningbai Would Be Intelligent Enough
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to The_Silent_Mess

    lol

    Ch 98 I Saw Your Old Lady Acting like a Big Bad Wolf to Scare Lin Chu
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    lol oh lady yan

    Ch 98 I Saw Your Old Lady Acting like a Big Bad Wolf to Scare Lin Chu
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to CTN

    =)

    Ch 97 My Goal Has Been Very Clear from Beginning to End
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
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  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    oooo lala

    Ch 97 My Goal Has Been Very Clear from Beginning to End
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Commented

    Yan Beicheng! control yourself!

    Ch 96 This Man Was Used to Being Sly Because He Had Cheated on His Exams When He Was Younger!
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
    detail
  • Vanbun
    Vanbun1yr
    Replied to fictiophiliastruck

    LOL

    Ch 96 This Man Was Used to Being Sly Because He Had Cheated on His Exams When He Was Younger!
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    The President is Being Shameless Again
    Urban · Dawnesque
    detail