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Sean_Atkinson4mthReplied to drumSNIPERCorrection: She was not aware it was Richard or a clone, just somebody who claimed to be able to bring him back.
[A Dullahan]- Sean_Atkinson5mthReplied to Myst_Assist
Sam should not have opened the door. Otherwise, he would not have been able to enter.
'I wish he was here to see all of this.' She thought. The worst part of it all was that she didn't know who to blame for his death. She had gone through so many emotions, and had gone from one person to the other, blaming Fex, blaming the Parasites, and even blaming Quinn. In the end, there was one person she wanted to blame more than anyone, but that person was already dead. - Sean_Atkinson7mthCommented
I wonder if there is an explanation on how they managed to get the timeline extended to this point. It's what 1 to 1.5 years at this point.
"Give you a compliment?" Macklin humphed and returned to his seat. Placing one leg over the other, he said, "Kid, are you so busy that you've forgotten your promise to create a magical weapon for me back then? It's already been so long. I ended up getting teased and mocked by that old fogy Al'Akir whenever I see him. Aldwin doesn't dare to leave the Guild of Magic at all." - Sean_Atkinson7mthReplied to Kaiten_The_Damned
It may have to do with the translation. Other novels I've read have a tendency to always mix up he/she, him/her.
Everyone in the Breezy Plains had heard about the jeweler Joanne before. Hence, everyone would cheer and rejoice over every piece of jewelry that he created. In addition to being a jeweler, he was also the successor of the Fasetti Family of the Northern Plains and a level-15 Archmage. - Sean_Atkinson7mthReplied to Machivelli
It is Gryffindor as he was the one who cursed Orrin.Didn't kill him but he got revenge
Black Clouds Town's disaster had definitely provoked Lin Li. For Lin Li, a maniac that protected short relationships, it was intolerable if anyone that had a friendly relationship with him before was hurt. The Merlin Family had hurt McGrenn, and thus Old Merlin and Grenville died. The whole Merlin Family had completely fallen, reduced to an inferior force in Jarrosus. Granger had hurt Orrin, and so Granger's fate had long been decided—it was useless even when Aldwin took action to stop it. Now, the Syer Bandits and this mysterious faction had harmed the townspeople of Black Clouds Town. Then, they were not far from death… - Sean_Atkinson9mthCommented
end repeated portion, even if some of it was reworded it was all the same discussion.
"Apart from that, there's also another transcendent creature with pretty good strength contracted." - Sean_Atkinson9mthCommented
start repeated past of story.author I feel like you forgot this portion since this was originally why he was going to the capital, then you changed it to the university aspect.
"By the way, you've been to the snowy mountain recently, right? How's the situation over there?" - Sean_Atkinson10mthCommented
This was a pointless paragraph. the % explored could have been added to the previous paragraph
Region 15, Region 16 and Region 17 are the regions which represented the highest dangers, they are so dangerous that they hadn't been explored even 5% till yet. - Sean_Atkinson10mthCommented
author forgot
Minerva realm would open in six days and for that, I still have many preparations to make, most importantly I have to buy a speed type of skill. - Sean_Atkinson1yrCommented
The princesses plans backfired hard
And stabbed it straight into the eye of the princess. - Sean_Atkinson1yrCommented
81st? I thought it said 81 to 90 were connected by a waterfall, and it was mentioned that Dawn was typically a level behind.
Then, finally, on the thirty-first floor right near the edge, I saw a group of three Arachnes circling a single person. - Sean_Atkinson1yrCommented
Nine will try to convince them to be his so very likely.
''He's going to do all of them, isn't he?'' She murmured to herself, stopping at the top of the stairs and looking back at the bedrooms the Valkyries were in. - Sean_Atkinson1yrReplied to Sean_Atkinson
- Sean_Atkinson1yrCommented
YYYYEEEESSSSSSS
Looking into Isabelle's eyes, he said, "Because people who only take and take from their parents are parasites that should keel over and die." - Sean_Atkinson1yrReplied to Trucker1487
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- Sean_Atkinson1yrCommented
Why mention this if he only has his 3 rank 5 pets out, it is a worthless filler.
The other two were also at the peak of Rank 4. - Sean_Atkinson1yrCommentedCh 124 Academy League (1)