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Aros_Tier

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2019-10-22 JoinedGlobal
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
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    Author did a good job in storytelling. Nothing much to review yet this is just what I obsever from 3 chapter.

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Man what a way to treat a bed ridden patient.

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Yep time to bail my boy. With what they said they ain't up to any good for you.

    They were far away, but the strange man could hear it clearly and knew he had to act; in this state, he trusted no one and could not even trust himself. Those comments sounded like they were trying to sell him, and he wasn't interested.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    The end.

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    He ain't nude if he had cloth on ain't he.These people are laughing at hobo what a horrible society XD

    Although other people couldn't help but laugh, the man didn't care as he stood up. He had thick black hair and, while most of his garments were ripped as a result of being burned, there was something tucked into one section of his shirt that, when he pulled out, was a pen that said LOVE, HAPPY BIRTHDAY.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    See my liegue one of our guys already leave.

    Is it true that the fourteen left because the King fell ill, or is there more to the story?
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Bad move my leigue never tell them you sick or you foresaw your and your kingdom dead. It will just drive all the key to find a people to replace you.

    But this King, who had been unwell and vomiting blood for a week, informed them that he had a dream in which he died and humanity died with him. When he told the fourteen families, the number seven vanished, leaving only thirteen families.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    The greatest threat that force human to devolop more... Giant cockroach what a menace.

    The fact that, unlike other Earths in the universe, Earth-16 still has some of its fearsome predators, such as megladon and velociraptor, attracted everyone together in this location. They even have creatures with new features, such as certain cockroaches that are nearly the size of people, as a result of which they have evolved in weaponry, machines, and wisdom.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    yep male men there is nothing manlier than this.

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Replied to AbalandeFK

    let me read pass chapter 2 first ;] still on the auxiliary.

    Ch -5 RACES
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    I adore the detail description the author put an effort into describing. Cheer for you♡

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Just a thought I notice that in the Skurran explanation there are phrase that mention the mighty Targoshrax but as I read about Targoshrax there is no mention of Skurran. Maybe the order of explaination could be swap since it is in no alphabet order anyway? or maybe the order is already base on order of appearance?(have not read yet)

    5. Targoshrax: Another race, known as the Targoshrax, also calls the mountains of Planet Citarada their home. The Targoshrax are highly skilled in mountain warfare and have developed a deep connection with the natural elements found in these rugged terrains. Their culture emphasizes discipline, strength, and an affinity for the land, making them formidable opponents and steadfast allies.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    I think it will be add later but is there yet a noticable member present?

    One of the Skurran's distinguishing features is its long, prehensile tail. The tail is flexible and muscular, assisting the creature in maintaining balance and providing an extra weapon in combat. At the end of the tail, a cluster of barbed spikes serves as a defensive mechanism and can be used to deliver swift and painful strikes.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Targoshrax the mighty sound cool but who are you.

    Skurran are formidable creatures native to the planet Amargans. Unlike the mighty Targoshrax, Skurran are considered lesser strong beasts, but they still possess a certain level of danger. These creatures are known for their agility and speed, making them formidable adversaries in close-quarters combat.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Wait so is the Amargans alien from this planet by nature or are they a native of the planet just being describe as alien like?

    Their society is structured around a hierarchical system, with leaders and warriors at the forefront. The Amargans are known for their military prowess, their discipline, and their unwavering determination in the face of adversity.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    I have yet to see him ;) Hope this is not a spoiler.

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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Imagine being so agile that you can move thing telepaticly. cool visual if I have to imagine. Maybe it mean my agility is through the roof I can wiggle my cell to the point I can vibrate the air to do my bidding XD

    The abilities or powers of mutants can vary widely, ranging from superhuman strength, speed, or agility to telekinesis, elemental manipulation, shape-shifting, or even psychic abilities. Each mutant typically possesses a unique combination of powers or attributes that sets them apart from others, giving them individuality and contributing to the diversity of this story's mutant population.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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  • Aros_Tier
    Aros_Tier9mth
    Commented

    Bold of you to assume I am a human (`∀´)Ψ

    I guess this doesn't need an explanation as we are all Humans and we know what we are.
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    Chosen By The System: The Avatar's Journey
    Fantasy · AbalandeFK
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