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please don't romance. I can't imagine Itachi with anyone. getting romance in this story will look forced. you basically don't give room for romance in this story, but for sure it will feel depressing and forced. Many good stories have been ruined by adding completely unnecessary romance to the story. if you want to make romance it's better if you make it with a separate novel because there are readers who don't want romance and some want it and I mean people who don't want romance into this story
I think it's better if Itachi hides his sharingan. because before canon started, shinigami slaughtered anyone who had power beyond their shinigami strength. if you remember with quincy etc. (I don't remember the Bleach anime in a long time I haven't read the manga and watched them)
I'm sorry, I know this story is a romance genre, but to be honest I kind of wished Will was asexual. I mean, romance had nothing to do with this story and I'd rather let it stay like this than it was in the early days of Will's relationship with June. Lol
I actually expect no pair for this story,, when it comes to sports stories, I expect things like friendship and other shounen stuff, but no not romance, I feel including romance will detract from the story, why should there be romance? romance just makes headaches come lol
I just read your story, and this is the best crossover fanfic so far. My adventure in this webnovel, although there are still some plot holes in your story but you really portray the character of Gojo Satoru well to cover it. I kind of hope there is no romance in this story, I hope it focuses more on friendship etc. somehow from every story I read, when they add romance to the story, it feels like the essence of the story itself is lost, especially those that have an action genre, or things to do with combat, I really don't like that genre mixed with romance which makes headaches come lol. Please no romance.
I have read all these chapters, while the story idea you wrote is interesting and amazing you are able to write this many chapters. I think it's good that you need to put a little bit of realism into your writing. you use too much anime logic in it so the story makes it look redundant and for sure if it goes further I'm sure I will be really bored and can't stand this story anymore. and for the MC who used to be mature, he doesn't seem to use his logic and common sense properly, he really exaggerates in his character portrayal and the portrayal of other characters, and I hope there is no romance in this story. I'm still looking forward to seeing the next chapter hope the next chapters will be even better