Evil Mc Evil mc is not good for your story please make him atleast consider his uncle controlling a family person is considered evil that is why I said evil mc
Your novel is way better than many Marvel&DC fanfictions keep it up but decrease the cringe part introduce not so famous characters slowly take reference from
GALL OF GAMMON
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WRATH OF GAMMON DROM WATTPAD
Ch 17 Ch - 16 Becoming an Angel
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