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Minos as a 9 year old
It was rude, instead of rejecting them nicely after being invited before they left. The lack of common courtesy and the fact that they flat out left, hence a sort of obedience.
This is pretty unnecessary
Im confused is this not Reaper of the Martial World? Unless you are rewriting it. Which would be quite nice. Because everything kind of went to shit after the ancient battlefield. Actually I’m not really sure where it went bad. The plot holes in this story are to many to count, sometimes they were explained other times just forgotten or some other dumb shit. BIG SPOILERS AHEAD 1. Why and how was abraxus injured. 2. The betrayal at the end was so stupid 3. The celestial deer sect was a SOUL based sect, why is the third disciple on the path of chaos 4. Kept mentioning “only 9” wives, only counted 7. 5. I can accept Dyon skipping several levels because he is him. But fighting peak dudes while still being a mortal. 6. So much build up for “One for all” yet it was barely mentioned afterwords. 7. Godammit the last 400 chapters made me almost cry because I could tell how rushed everything was. 8. Idk the story was so good and then it was not, I cant really explain. 9. Somewhere a little before the ancient battlefield was where it all went wrong, maybe even before that. It ended way to abruptly, everything was hella rushed. The betrayals were confusing, like uno reverse cards. Tbh doing away with anything relating to past lives would be nice. I was expecting a cool ass immortal plane arc then them going to other planes. But it was like he arrived there and was like oh cool lots of memories are back let me skip 2000 chapter and kill with Unexplained power. He didnt even name his new constitution
Every single asIan novel I’ve read, this whole thing about getting a cold in hot/cold water or when it rains. Is the immune system different or is it just a cultural thing? Or is it just a plot device? People always get sick for the slightest things. I always assumed the getting a cold when its cold was more attributed to being inside more often due to it being cold. Resulting in being around others in close proximity and spreading bacteria etc.
Honestly It’d be quite cool if he used his morph ability to compact/multiply his strength/size, maybe that will come later.
More character description than the MC in one paragraph? Hmm I wonder who it could be.
I wonder if a anti-suicide suit would work and player he jailed. Probably a way around it though
dont worry obviously she isn't bloodrelated ..