I was liking it upto where he decided to become a doctor for money . it is illogical. he could have been a stock broker. first take a loan and then increase money in stock market. he can say if anyone asked that after graduation he was researching the finance market and his success comes from it.

ditto

start very similar to warlock of the magus world

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