Have to say , it has been a great trip and looking forward to the next generation !

This a unique story. Am enjoying the events as they happen to the characters new life. Plus not going completely in-depth in all details a bonus as well.

Don know if still writing,except for the integrity part. So far an absolute terrific story…

Indeed, a good story!

The most charming man! Ok that made me snicker to myself.

Fantastic

WoulD like to continue reading your story but have been Tom by customer service that to read I have to pay again what I already paid just to gain back the same 10 pages I have already read. Hope this writing adventure goes well for you. Great story and wanted to be of the 15 to help out but will be canceling the subscription. The policy of the company is to take away from the writer and the reader’s experience. I had waited so I could read on with your story while away in the military to find out I need to pay extra for keeping up with chapters . So again, good luck and hope all goes well with your writing. For sadly I will not know.

Simply outstanding! Wish I could have joined the 15 elite team but didn’t think I would be of much help. Soooo just want to leave off Go elite Go!!!

Shaaakkuuuunniii!

On a roll, outstanding!

I actually like the story with a new twist to it for the recarnation fans.

Just want to say , I truly like the story. it has a great flow and I actually like how straight forward his objective is. Knowing he died and can re-do, he is straight out lvling to be better. Absolutely enjoying!

So be it! :(

Like the build up, as it keeps gaining to a completely new adversary.

Excellent Job on the twists and turns.

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

As Naomi Said ”oh god , thank god!”

I cannot decide I am ruby or team Naomi. And for the first time and I absolutely hate to say I want the guy to get both. Never a big fan of Harlem but the real world and game world complexity has for the first time changed my mind.

Absolutely enjoying the plot twist..