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AntiHero874

AntiHero874

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An Anti-Hero doesn't mean being a villain.

2019-09-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8744mth
    Posted

    When it comes to Fantasy, nothing goes wrong, and as for this, I say the writing is creative. Me personally could only think one, an interesting story. Git gud for the writer.

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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8744mth
    Posted

    Okay, quick review, this story really intrigue, especially the plot. Very simple, no complex words for to understand, and overall, this is an amazing book for someone who love sci-fi and military like. Gotta love it.Git gud for the writer

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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Posted

    Ngl, it's so good. yet I didn't read to the end. Second of all, good grammar, so no need to worry about. Git Gud me man. You can do that much better.

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    Love or profession his temptation
    Urban · Vee_High
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Posted

    Hey, not bad eh? Sorry about the late review. It seems quite well, the grammar and the plot. Idk the me (since I'm got used with Berserk vibe) yet i can say, it had potential. that's all from me. git gud

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    Among Gods
    Fantasy · ArroganceIsKing
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Posted

    Well, honestly here, I'm just gonna asiiiiide the LGBTQ+ content, yet it's a well written. there's nothing to say here because I'm just read a few chapters, yet seems intrigued. I look forward to it.

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    Infinite Transmigration
    LGBT+ · Theomancy
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Posted

    Well, I might say a few words for this. It do had some potential, yet maybe i mislook some of the mistakes, since this story is well-build. On some case, I'm pretty sure it had some emotion chemistry, which is good, nonetheless the grammar almost had me. But then, it doesn't matter. I guess if this author can refine his mistakes and try to make it interesting, because tbh i got intrigued and interest on it. So i would love to see what's comes next.

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    Librarian of the Eternal Library
    Fantasy · MythicBunny
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Commented

    Bonus fact about Osamu's family: After the war, as Akemi and Osamu were already married, they already had children. Yet, some events happened that made that family separation in different ways. So, before they separate, Osamu gave his family an eternal spirit, where they cannot be killed, cannot turn old until they met once again. It happened after the fallen of the Demon lord Festival, where Commander Suzuki and Commander Kaneki were.

    Ch 25 Chapter 25: Tarnish One
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    Critical Risk (Reboot)
    Fantasy · AntiHero874
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8741yr
    Replied to DaoistF84z7w

    thanks for your comment of my work, I'm well aware of your criticism and i understand why. However, this is the first work i ever made, so there's no wonder i had some amature mistakes. I will look forward of my details and I'm sure I'll fix my work. Thanks.

    I, Takeru Suzuki, a mature teenager and living a peaceful life since the last war in the year 1945, where Hiroshima and Kyoto were attacked by other nations and during that time, our empire was rising, conquering almost the whole Asian-Pacific Ocean. My father was once a soldier at that time and sacrificed his life, bringing glory to their nation and honor. At the time I was still inside in my mother's womb. After days passed, the atmosphere changed. A lot of inventions were created, scholarships, and wise leaders were born. After the war, I was born.
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    CRITICAL RISK
    Fantasy · AntiHero874
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    I didn't expect that story will be like this. In other words, I enjoy it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep on your writing to make your readers enjoy your story. There's nothing to say more.

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    My Students Are Vampires!
    Fantasy · Little_Foxxy
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    Thanks for your review everyone. I couldn't improve my novel without you .Make sure you continue reading my novel sequel and other novels I have write it. Anyways, since this is my first novel, which everything seems odd, I promise the next sequel will be better. Thanks.

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    CRITICAL RISK
    Fantasy · AntiHero874
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    I have nothing to say because is a good read. I just have to wait for the new update. Btw, I am not an expert on reviewers, however, keep going there.

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    The Lucifer's soul
    Fantasy · bella_melodia
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    TBH, you have no prob with your storylines, your grammar is good, and you mention the background of the world. There's nothing to criticize, however, I still need to see where it goes next in the future update. Keep it up.

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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    Based on my early review, it's a bit paced, but I can catch up with it. Your writing is good but there are some grammar issues. I'm not that professional at reviewing someone's book but that's my opinion. Overall, your story is pretty well done and I hope you, as the author will make some improvement, just a bit.

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    Yarinaoshi
    Fantasy · OneSevenEight
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    Well, it's a good story but it's a little bit heavy to me. But, that's just my opinion. Overall, its moderate read and I love to read more like this

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    The Devil, The Hound and The Thief
    Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Posted

    To me, it's interesting to read this story not because the storyline only, it also have it's own evolution, and the writing is unique. For example, the MC asking the system to list down his ability. I hope he'll make some improvement, especially his grammar. That's all from me.

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    Reborn to become a heavenly serpent.
    Fantasy · Evertruth727_
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  • AntiHero874
    AntiHero8742yr
    Replied to OakFlame

    i appreciate your review....and yes part one is a flop... try to read part 2

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    CRITICAL RISK
    Fantasy · AntiHero874
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