My favourite fiction. It is one of those that you immediately want the next chapter.

I am starting to panic now, at first I just thought the author needed a break, but still nothing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This is a great story but you should look for someone to proof read your work as there is quite a few places that had mistakes or didn't make sense. Keep on writing as I like the idea of this story.

Can you time skip to their return please.

Don't you mean Nova and not Rina?

Very repetitive, it feels like I am reading the same chapter again and again.

I am really enjoying it so far and find myself getting impatient for the next chapters of the story. I am wondering if there will be flashback chapters or will his past be revealed during the future plot.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

The first chapter is awful, it is almost painful to read. Even if English is not your first language there is a minimum that should be reached before posting a story or get a beta that can proofread it for you. Until then you should keep working on your stories but not upload them.