There's something especially for you in the newest chapter.

Hey, I'd greatly enjoy it if you made comments about stuff like structure, style, character development, any of the numerous subplots, and so on. But no predictions, okay?

Believe me, I tried to get it in there. But this portal is hopeless in some respects.

You're anticipating again. Happily you're wrong again, but if you were right you'd automatically force me to rethink what I had planned for the next chapter. Listen, if you want to discuss the plot with me, I can give you my email. But please don't do it here because you know the story so well you're likely to reveal what I want to write next, and I'll have to do all this extra work.

You're wrong. Stop anticipating and interpreting things and just enjoy the story...

Thank you. That's so nice to hear. You might like the stories in The Bewildering Effect of Cabbages collection even better - in my opinion that's the best work I've published on this platform.

This, this, this, not his! Sorry, I was typing in a hurry. Had to take prolonged break because of other demands on my time, but don't worry - this story is going to continue as long as I'm able to write.

No worries. I intend to keep writing this until I die. As you may have noticed, it's only 1973 in the story.

You'll see how his turns out...

It's a joke, man.

Why would you read through a whole thread when you find it repulsive?

Stop writing me then, okay? Please? Go and indulge your fondness for repulsive people with someone else.

Were you looking at the mirror while writing this? You should've read the previous comment instead.

I'm working on the next one right now.

I'm actually thinking about having him meet someone new. But Fiona will definitely show up at some point, too.

Haven't you noticed this guy is complicated?

What the fuck are you talking about?

Cheers, mate.

Well, not exactly everyone.

He's still drunk.