Jajaja most Chinese fics are like that, whether they're about anime or comics. And to be honest as a reader, that's frustrating and makes you stop reading. Good job with the changes you're making. It makes reading more enjoyable and fun

Why do you call May and Mary "Parker"? They adopted the surname after getting married. May's maiden name is Reilly and Mary's is Fitzpatrick.

Among my personal physical tastes I like sona more. I have always thought that Sona's character is better than Rias's. and there are a vast number of female characters better than her. but I can understand why many people like Rias's design and her fan service haha so just with the fact that you use sona as a main character I'm already on the ship.

I didn't say it's forced, even though it might seem like it right now, but this storyline feels truly chilling even without the romantic feelings involved. Personally, for me, reading this chapter was extremely uncomfortable, like being a deranged stalker watching their victim. Of course, this is just my perspective, there may be people who enjoy all of this. Putting that aside, the story is well-written and has a good narrative. Maybe some monologues are unnecessarily drawn out, but it still doesn'tfeel too heavy.

Seriously, can't they just create a normal romantic story instead of resorting to silly lineage stuff and "I don't know what I feel" nonsenseseriously. That obsession thing is really creepy.