It's a good start for a new novel... but i find that,it is not having a steady growth of MC's strength and character... it's a bit overbearing and overwhelming, also fast paced.... resulting in not letting the reader to relish the story to his heart's content. So I can hope that, you take note of it in the future. Thank you.[img=update][img=update]

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