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I thought the woman was conjuring lightning and he stopped her from doing so.
It’s a pyramid scheme
When will he finally not be a mortal anymore?! That makes me frustrated some time lol
I like your novel a lot, but I think it would help if you briefly state the age of all people. It doesn’t have to be every person and it would be enough to mention the age every time it changes or you introduce a new person which seems to be of importance, like the princess. It would help the reader to better imagine how the person looks. Keep up your good work!