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This novel is quite good to get hooked but can be better if bellow points are handled better 1. Fighting scenes are very boring with mc and opponents having very limited skills .Fighting pattern is getting similar as story process. 2. Making chaps lengthy with unnecessary words describing how a person looks and what he wears (even if you know he'll get killed within the same chap) 3. Same constant reaction from mc and fmc like they smirks cruelly, smirks mischievously, smirks like this like that (getting a very frustrated vibe reading that) 4. R-18 scenes are very simplistic with not much detailing and a tad bit boring (feels like r-18 scenes are there or not doesn't matter)