It's really good and well thought out but I want more chapters pls......................................................................................................................

Needs an actual story to read but otherwise good novel 10/10 good concept.

hey author you ok?

how come all the good novels have like a long wait time for the next chapter

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What most authors miss in writing is how to pace their book if you can slow your pace you can get a lot of readers. Also don't go too slow or people will not read it because it's too slow. If you can read other books on here you can find something like Marvel RE-DO not fast but not slow either. But I recommend to spread your pacing.

Keep this up usually they don't go past the fifth chapter so it's really cool that you are able to write this as most would have already given up by now so good luck and I hope you continue this more and not drop.

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are you okay author man

thx for chapter author man

no problem always here for a good novel

good chapter want more

Hey are you ever going to finish your novel I would love to read it more

are you still updating this novel or did you drop it?

your good my dude

I think i read something like this a year ago but it was discontinued I hope this story can keep going.

yeeeeeeee

keep up the good work

you good as long as you update I'm satisfied