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She thought the same thing Yuan thought at first (thinking it wasn’t a big deal)
The author did an amazing job with this translation. There are a couple errors but it is SO much better than MTL and the updating speed was amazing. The story itself was a good read, the characters are interesting, that includes side characters and villains as well which is nice.
Will give you time I think is what you meant?
Did you misspell block as as black? Black of ground seems wrong to me
Around her not him
Maybe rephrase “You must this fact go into your head” to something like “you must get this fact through your head”. It sounds a bit off as is right now to me
Isn’t this Vesryn in pain not Quidrus?
Ah gotcha. Sorry if I sounded harsh the last couple chapters I did not have bad intentions
I know that but shouldn’t there be an adjective there? she met with her highschool after 3 decades makes it sound like she’s meeting the school not a person from the school.
Scyth not slice
High school… friend? Classmate?
Too small not too less
He has a mask on how does Berith know that he is emotionless?
Challenge the lion*
I’m guessing that orb of light was something Ingrid gave to Nora as approval because at the beginning of the novel didn’t Laun make a pact with her that made him unable to bang other women without her permission or he’d die (or something along those lines)
I’m a little confused at what Nora is saying. Anyone have an explanation for the first line when talking about why Lenore is still in the bath?