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The author is getting worse at details. He keeps forgetting things.
I'l have to go back but I'm positive Coid had all white grades.
I also wondered that. Why does he always use the most out of control blast? Keep is the size of a grape and stabilize it and then use it.
How are they alive? Two weeks without food or water they should be dead or close to it. Unless do arcane mages not need to eat or drink anymore, has that been explained at all? Also no mention of how they slept or kept watch. Story so far is always real sparse on the details.
Why would the empire let academies exist that assissnate the future powerhouses of the empire? If you want your empire to be strong you need to groom every exceptional talent you find. I would be pissed and dismantle the entire academy system and bring it fully under the empire. Such a dumb way to govern.
Would be nice if we were explained some of these things. Like the most basic writing advice is "Show don't Tell". Don't just tell us he got all of these things. Have a scene where he sits down to meditate and goes into the chaos space for the first time since his breakthrough. Set the scene on how he concentrates on the elements and how he feels a connection. Have him try to manifest them and now he can feel it's much easier. Have him have an epiphany or something that with his closer connection a better way to cultivate is revealed. Have him explore the differences and figure out why this new technique is better than the schools technique. Build the world. Don't just say he got this, he got this, he got this. Write a story, not a dang list.
What a goofball
What' the point of the chaos space if he is unable to grasp the element there? Also what is he doing when he comprehends I the chaos space? Like what steps is he doing specifically. Isn' summoning the elements like the entire point of the chaos space? I feel like this hasn't been described at all. Hopefully during the free chapters this starts making a lot more sense. If it is nonsense all the way through, no point in paying for more.
I can excuse his blockhead behavior for now. I just really hope he is t so bad as he ages. I can't read a dumb protagonist very easily. The fact the author is pointing out he is dumb does help a little.
This assumes that everyone that won 1 match was undefeated and won all 5. Which is very far fetched. I bet there were a lot of people that lost after 1 win or even 4 wins. Someone did the math in another comment that probably only 1 in 30 people moved on to the next stage. So if 3 million people registered roughly 1 hundred thousand are moving on.
I also was thinking this. Glad someone did the math.