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YPENT

YPENT

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Not all scars show, Not all wounds heal, Sometimes you can't see the pain someone feels -Anonymous

2019-08-01 JoinedSouth Korea
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  • YPENT
    YPENT2yr
    Posted

    Nice story, though you are in a (very) serious need for an Editor. I liked the names. But right now the novel feels to much like other fiction-fantasy novels...I am looking forward to the other chapters. Keep it up and Keep it going!!

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    The Prophecy Unfolds, But Goes Beyond
    Fantasy · Rick_Bhattacharyya
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  • YPENT
    YPENT2yr
    Commented

    If he doesn't improve his humour, he'll never have a gf/bf

    "Mom, you should be careful. You're overstressing. I can see dark rectangles and squares and ovals and all kinds of shapes over your eyes," I said.
    altalt
    The Prophecy Unfolds, But Goes Beyond
    Fantasy · Rick_Bhattacharyya
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  • YPENT
    YPENT2yr
    Commented

    I like the name Syncret

    Ch 1 I discover my first power
    altalt
    The Prophecy Unfolds, But Goes Beyond
    Fantasy · Rick_Bhattacharyya
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