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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial2yr
    Posted

    great read[img=recommend] {hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh}

    Quest of Truth
    Eastern Β· DarthQuil
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Posted

    Has potential to be great but that depends on how the aithor plans his plot 🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞🍞πŸ₯œπŸ„πŸ₯‘πŸ₯”πŸ₯‘πŸ₯œπŸ‘πŸ₯‘πŸ₯‘πŸ₯”πŸ“πŸŒπŸ†πŸ†πŸ†πŸ†πŸ†πŸ₯”πŸ₯”πŸ₯”πŸ₯”πŸ₯”πŸ₯”πŸ“πŸ“πŸ“πŸ’πŸ’πŸ₯”πŸ₯•πŸ₯•πŸ₯œπŸ†πŸπŸŽπŸΊπŸ₯€πŸ₯€πŸ₯ƒπŸ₯‚πŸ₯‚πŸ₯‚πŸ₯€πŸ₯’🍹πŸ₯€πŸΊπŸΊπŸΊπŸ₯‚

    γ“γ‚Œγ‚’ε‰Šι™€9
    Fantasy Β· MonarchX
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    hope its female that be dope...whats their power

    Ch 140 Starting the second round of training
    Return of the demon
    Eastern Β· Idontknowwhattosay
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    present

    Ch 94 Release of slaughter.
    The Bloodiest Devil.
    Eastern Β· 1mmortal_Azure
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Posted

    except for the in consistency in updates this book is well written the characterdesign are splendid and the world background is good enough to keep the book interesting...also the author should explain his cultivation system in more details cause its still confussing

    The Bloodiest Devil.
    Eastern Β· 1mmortal_Azure
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    try writing other genres just to open up new ideas

    Ch 144 Unyielding (Part 2)
    Nine Venoms Sect Founder
    Eastern Β· Devil_Paragon
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    Hope he doesnt join the blades

    This chapter has been deleted.
    The Fraternity
    Fantasy Β· RD_Hughes
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    paragraph your work

    Ch 11 The Void Race
    Dao King of the Void
    Eastern Β· Glocc_Williams
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Posted

    gonna give myself five stars cause why not but you reading this can rate how ever you want this is just a way for me to improve my writing skills so the more strict you rate me the more learn

    Typical MC
    Fantasy Β· supreme_primordial
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Replied to koladeizdavid

    the way your storyline flows is the same 1.dead parents 2.unrealistic powers thay your character has not saying that its bad to load up your mc with op powers and if i guess right you want depth to your character but how will he progress when he is given everything just saying you should paint your own picture dont trace the same script that every author follows (check out keviascending and devil paragon;s book you will get what i mean)

    Cultivation Epic: Divine Godly Punisher, Armed With Imposing Systems
    Fantasy Β· koladeizdavid
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    Didnt the devil ancestor have a son named harun who tried to kill him but was punished

    Ch 66 Why Should I?
    Nine Venoms Sect Founder
    Eastern Β· Devil_Paragon
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  • supreme_primordial
    supreme_primordial3yr
    Commented

    How does lava connect to wind plus dont repeat the same novel process that many have written you have potential to be special

    Ch 27 Ch 27: Heaven Sword Slash
    Divine God Against The Heavens
    Fantasy Β· RazaKarim
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