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Im really torn on this one, the writhing is amazing and the story só far ia great...BUT...Yuri started and os a dealbreaker for me (this novel would be a 10/10 for me without any romance and the Constant Yuri ALL over the place remove ALL the impact and well constructed story) A pity, because i loved the family interaction.
The concept is amazing but there is a LOT of problems até the start of this novel. The characters and story até the start is a mesa, a mexican military man going to Europe and plain explosion, then he can speak latim and for god forsaken reason that you have to turn off your brain, there is a woman there to understand. Obs in history major you dont learn latim, this is one of MANY plot devices inserted in the novel to connect the narrativa, BUT in turn makes It all fake and shallow, Just like the dialogue that isnt How normal people speak daily. I will try to read more and the author getting better, but the start need a serious look.
The MC is THE worse part, he was old already but now Just a Dumb as a door edgy kid for some reason and he is so Dumb that the entire cast of the novel need to have negative IQ to respect and get fooled by him. Kid appears with a LOT of money out of nowhere and his parents Just accept...shooting in the street, all os fine...negociating with people, easy trick to fool them.
Sorry but this novel lack an organic feel and development. Everything just exist to help and please the MC, a rich and beautiful girl Falls for the Guy after one encontrar, he is protected and find a rich Backer out of nothing and the plot even put the two on the same boat...he finds the best players for his guild Just walking. The world in game and outside Just doesnt feel natural and organic.