i dont see why you let raynare leave in the earlier chapter only to kill her here like it was totally pointless & kinda copy/paste of canon

the first novel i read of this kind the protagonist is in honghuang after journey to the west so the world quality is at its lowest but he starts restoring honghuang world quality to the way it was when pangu opened the world not only does he restore it but he continues strengthening the land & universe & everybody around him become some of the strongest of course he doesnt know any of this

hes pretty dense through the whole novel but i dont mind it i like this kind of book where the protag thinks hes mortal but hes actually at the peak(as long as the protagonist isnt a walking mat for all side characters) & about the lemons since its a cn webnovel there isnt blatant scenes its just mentioned like he stayed the night at yuexuan & the next morning his face is pale & his legs are wobbly while tang yuehua is described as looking radiant

i think the protagonist is a male version of the urban legend w/ that very beautiful girl that makes people insanely obsessed w/ her

this novel could have been way better if the author added another universe to the douluo universe since the characters gained cultivation techniques from universes that are so much stronger than douluo. the novel kind of ends abruptly & there are a few problems i have like somethings are brought up once & then forgotten & there is also the part where the protag is pretty much hollowed out after intercourse w/ tang yuehua even tho shes only level 9 & the protag is the incarnation of the dao so it doesnt make much sense that his physique is so weak that hes hollowed out after intercourse w/ someone that doesnt even have 1 spirit ring

the protag is the incarnation of the dao so if he thinks a soul beast is a normal animal it becomes a normal animal w/o a spirit ring

why even drink the water when thats what gave him a heart disease in canon? are you telling me a race that has pretty much unlimited potential still needs external things that damage the body to become stronger?? foolish af

since when does not smiling in a pic mean youre arrogant, cold, & bossy??

soul land after 1 is pretty much tang sans backyard

230book . com has a lot of doulou books w/ the protagonist on the soul halls side or neither side except their own. the books on the site are free & you can pretty much read through all books w/o problem w/ google translate unlike some other free chinese sites that have messed up chapters like halfway through the book

if he only focus on the soul aspect of cultivation whats the difference between this arc & the bleach arc?? other than a different world hes pretty much doing the same thing he did in bleach imo

this book is meh konan seems more like the protagonist than the mc does also the fact author doesnt want to make the mc stronger or more talented but makes konan way stronger & more talented is annoying af like the fact his harem will get all his talents(watered down) while he gets only larger chakra in return(even tho chakra is a mix of spirit & body but souls would only increase spirit) is pretty ridiculous

while i do really like the book imo coming to cultivation worlds & not being able to cultivate the best of the best is pretty stupid he should just stay in anime worlds at that point .

the book is alright free but to pay for content thats neither new nor unique is lame .

qingyues new personality is a serious turnoff imo

the boosted gear & divine dividing dont exist since ddraig & albion were taken away by sora at the start of the dxd arc