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Billy_Castellanos

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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1mth
    Replied to KopiCAT

    But his earlier works have romance and even got it as main plot. Samsara, Throne Of Magical Arcana, and Martial Art Master. The third one basically a romance novel with action subplot. And it was exceptionally great, even far surpassing romance novel made from many female writers.

    At this point, he smiled. "Moreover, I want to experience genuine pleasure."
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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1mth
    Replied to zoekin

    True. This book's translator deserve to be fired tbh. I can barely understood whats going on. They kept introducing new words and when I search them on google, it just mean so simple.

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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1mth
    Posted

    Whats wrong with the translation?! This is definitely the downgrade version of the first book! The french were already annoying enough, and you had the nerve to add alot of words that non-native speakers find them difficult to understand? It really broke the immersion and the talks between characters sounds awkward. And by the way, I found the style of translation somehow similiar to Chat GPT.

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    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Posted

    Hello! I'm an AE from Webnovel. I'm currently searching for books with potential to get contracted. If you hadn't contracted yet, and interested. Please reply to this message. Thank you ^^

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    Super Billionaire: Era of Devaluation
    Urban · CrazyAmazy
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 24 Golden Sovereign Knight
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    Reincarnated With Erotica System
    Fantasy · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 23 First Fight [Edited]
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    Reincarnated With Erotica System
    Fantasy · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Posted

    Coming here for the cliche, rather interesting premise. The writing quality is decent overall, but could benefit from some trimming of unnecessary or overly long paragraphs to allow readers to draw their own inferences. There were a few errors, such as misplaced pronouns, but they were relatively minor and likely to be corrected by the author upon my review. (Mind you, I'm not a native English speaker myself. So, I might be mistaken about the grammar, and you should just check it out yourself.) The story pacing may be slow, but not to the point of being boring. The author has gradually revealed information about the world throughout the 20 chapters so far, even though only three hours have passed in the novel's world. Although it's slower than some other novels, it's still better than those that fail to reveal any background information after several chapters. So far, the author has introduced us to two distinct entities for the system in the novel. One of them was a typical system, which functioned passively without the ability to communicate. The other was a genie, acting as a customer service representative for the system and assisting players when they experienced difficulties. The update rate was decent, with at least two chapters being released per day. While I don't have any issues with this aspect, I believe it would be even better if the author could release more chapters daily. P.S (I reserve the right to change my review after reading more chapters, so I encourage the author to maintain consistency in their work.)

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    Reincarnated With Erotica System
    Fantasy · Debauchery_Scholar
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Replied to Faechan

    Its great to be honest. Like latin. But as far as I know, using strange characters / chinese/korean language are banned. I dont know about using special font, just be careful.

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    Her Devil's Allure
    Fantasy · Faechan
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Commented

    How do you write with this font?

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    Her Devil's Allure
    Fantasy · Faechan
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos1yr
    Replied to CaCao

    Dont mention SSH. He's a not a monster, he's a god.

    "Could it also be that maybe he does have a supernatural ability? But for a rookie fight with only four months of training to defeat a master... if Master Road knew, he'd be sick... " "A Plumber Eating Mushrooms" responded.
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    Martial Arts Master
    Action · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    Y-you?

    Song Xing Xing chuckled. "Then, what do you want to eat?"
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    You're My Only Star
    Urban · zetsubouaichan
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    Well, Lu Xun, I think you've a reason to propose her rn.

    As she watched the beautiful ceremony, Song  Xing Xing had the urge to get married as well...
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    You're My Only Star
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    More bonus please authorrr

    Ch 195 [Bonus chapter]A Figure Emerged
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    You're My Only Star
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    I bet in the next few chapters, Lu Xun going to catch both Song Xing Xing and Huo together. Then, Lu Xun gonna declare Song Xing Xing as his property haha.

    Ch 159 Why are You Not Sleeping?
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    You're My Only Star
    Urban · zetsubouaichan
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    Only a peck? This should be the time for legendary dominnering ceo quote to appear from Lu Xun's mouth. "You're playing with fire, girl."

    As the vehicle stopped at the traffic light, Song Xing Xing released her seat belt briefly and pressed her lips on his jaw. "Thank you."
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    You're My Only Star
    Urban · zetsubouaichan
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    Awwww,I cant suppress my smile ahahaha. Author, I love you for making my day brighter with ur writing <3

    Ch 135 Did You Miss Me?
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    You're My Only Star
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Replied to white_panther0078

    Sorry, this was done without proper thinking :( There seems no way I'm going to continue this series

    Ch 28 Dream
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    The Elemental's System
    Fantasy · Billy_Castellanos
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Replied to StanLJP

    I wonder why I found the name quite familiar, turns out it was one of the novels I stopped reading for awhile due to how little chapters are available back then. Haha, thanks, I'll read it once again then.

    Her reaction made Lou Cheng itching to reveal the secret. He patiently waited for a moment. Upon hearing Yan Zheke say "all done", he immediately took out the cell phone and entered the forum. There was a new reply in the signing-up post, and the replier's name was "Lou Cheng's Girlfriend".
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    Martial Arts Master
    Action · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Replied to StanLJP

    Do u have similiar novel like this one where the romance is quite great?

    Her reaction made Lou Cheng itching to reveal the secret. He patiently waited for a moment. Upon hearing Yan Zheke say "all done", he immediately took out the cell phone and entered the forum. There was a new reply in the signing-up post, and the replier's name was "Lou Cheng's Girlfriend".
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    Martial Arts Master
    Action · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Billy_Castellanos
    Billy_Castellanos2yr
    Commented

    Catherine is a quite annoying imo. She was acting completely rude toward a man who willingly helped her (Sebastian) and shares her bad opinion regarding Arthur openly, like what the heck?? She should refrain her outgoing bigmouth personality a bit 😪

    Ch 120 ARTHUR'S DARK EXPRESSION
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    Tangled by Fate
    Fantasy · Flow07
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