Please, everyone share your thoughts each chapter as it will help me make the story constantly better and will allow me to understand what you guys respond to best

Shameless Author Here, I believe you guys will find this book rather fun to read, and hopefully, y'all will give it a chance. I'm new to novel writing, and I'm only releasing these first three chapters and stockpiling the rest until next month because I have to do schoolwork for my degree in music production. I will take into consideration all comments and thoughts y'all have while releasing one or two chapters more this month and then next month I will begin releasing in bulk around 2 chapters a day each week for a total of about 10 chapters per week.