reading_more_4life
I enjoy reading good stories... definitely a fan of Isekei/transmigration, strong female characters, and story's with historic elements.
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she called the chef to be sure there would be no raspberries at dinner & discovered the situation. best answer
so much for he isn't worthy of his mommy....
oh heavens 🤣😂🤣💞
Suggestion: Looking at Jennie, her maid, (i recommend cutting {her} from in front of the maids name.
suggestion: she shouted(,) holding
last line suggestion: but (it) did not mean she would make it easy for them.
suggestion Just like in her previous life, in her (father's) point of view
but I thought she got that back before she forced a half-@$$ apology from trashta & Allen....
lol, I use Google docs on my phone, since my laptop crashed & i don't have cash to replace the battery core. I also only offered as I enjoy the story & got a lot of time on my hands babysitting my mother-in-law (several hip surgeries left her mobility challenged). So I don't mind. I'm just sitting around reading most of the time. lol
her main goal, to beat him with a jewel kick. any other method of winning will leave her unsatisfied.
yeah there are a number of minor mistakes, but it's a fun story. I just didn't want to leave a ton of comment notes.... but if ya want someone to do a preliminary read through to try catch things. I don't mind being a spare set of eyes. [img=recommend]
yeah i noticed it several times. .. do you use Google docs?
yep, Sir Howard & Jen lined up to get tickets on that ship... this is just my supposition but... So, her bio father stole his brother God's son & hid him (our 'charming' Duke) the rose gold thread of a strong fire user...
yep every sign for a ship right there....
hallucinations i think the h got dropped possibly in editing
suggestion: i think substituting 'mortal' with 'deadly' would make this read smoother.
oh I am loving the butler character.!!!!! I hope he has a good size play in the story. he with the two knights would be a great 3 stooges team, or so it seems.
correction suggestion: It's "nothing" at all like the fairytale you are imagining.
why not use this event to publicly gift him the rings