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2019-07-04 JoinedGlobal
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00013mth
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    Jayce's voice swelled with passion, his words carrying an undeniable fervor. "No longer can we afford to be divided. We must cast aside our differences, our past grudges, and work together as one. We are all survivors in this new world, and it is through unity that we will find strength."
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    Chef in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · leeroycgna
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00014mth
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    Rewards... System Fairy
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    Extreme Wealth System
    Urban · mobisa
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito000110mth
    Commented

    Bro will put Kevin in the kids section

    "Tell Dad and Mom that I want this party to have a separate section for adults and younger people," Asher said. Stephen nodded and went back. Stephen would usually follow Arthur, but due to the party, he was staying in the estate to manage everything.
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    Why Should I Stop Being a Villain
    Fantasy · Raos_IOI
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    Incognito00011yr
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    Conquering The Novel
    Fantasy · Enigma0
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to TheJadeBeauty
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    My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse
    Games · Haobo_Zhang
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to Grimgrim
    'Eh? This is my Status?' An Interface appeared in front of Persia's sight. Unlike the Infrared Spectrum world around her, The Interface was unaffected by her strange snake sight. The Interface had a Dark Color scheme with its White Color Text. It looked like some Evil Grimoire with her Status plastered on it.
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    The World Serpent
    Fantasy · OrdinaryHuman
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
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    In fact, I kind of felt bad for them.
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    SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
    Fantasy · Magecrafter
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    the skill that took him back 7 years in time is D rank? -__-?

    * Skill 4 <Spool Back> (D)
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    Should I Become a Villain?
    Fantasy · AFM31_ALDA
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to Barion_Trident

    author when someone asks a question: continue reading

    "Let's see if you can exceed my expectations one more time, child who has come from another world!!!".
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    The rise of the pervert primordial
    Fantasy · Barion_Trident
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to Drei05

    ye I might have been a little bit harsh, but moving forward I recommend focusing more on the basics like grammar/char design/plot progression and maybe revisit older chapters and at least improve the grammar. if you are using this novel as a way to improve your skills then 1/ chap a day isn't really necessary, focus on quality over quantity and if anything create an amazing second book 😅idk the ideas are clearly there, just need to work on that execution, I know writing is 100 times harder than reading and I am not trying to trample on your effort if that's how my review looked like, I just got a lil annoyed because the idea was there, exactly the genre I love reading but just was off... idk keep it up, hard work usually pays off if you grind long enough

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    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
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    writing quality isn't the worst but far bellow the standards of what the rating of the book would suggest, basically reviews seem lil fake 😅 honestly just barely better than some mtl novels that webnovel puts out. story development is very weird at times, there is no pace to it, stuff just happens without a good reason, basically a lot of forced plots just because you as the author can do it i guess. I guess it's due to being an inexperienced author and it's hard to make that plot development seem more natural you, idk... probably know about this problem yourself. characters are honestly bad... like they aren't even budget author pov's copies, copies so bad that it's insulting to the originals. Ye I said it, might seem harsh but that's the reality of things, you have 30+ reviews telling you how good the book is, but it's not.... not even close. the idea it self is good but execution is way off I could go in deeper but I won't lol, maybe will check this book out again in the far future and write another review đŸ„±

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    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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    Incognito00011yr
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    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    std::cout<<"Hello World!";

    Hello World!
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    The Extra's Dominance
    Fantasy · Drei05
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to iyourgranddaddy
    [Have you ever seen a post that puts a curse on you?]
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    This Simplification Is Too Outrageous
    Urban · Making Money For Instant Noodle First
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    the only realistic thing about this situation is that government officials accepted a bribe

    "The terms of that contract were that they won't tell a soul about the contract I made with Walric and the money transaction that will happen if I won. In return, I will give them 20% of the money I will get from Walric's family. Obviously, I will be giving them the same amount of money even if I lost to Walric."
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    Author's Reincarnation in a Fantasy Setting
    Fantasy · moon_senpai
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    💀 ayo

    There were hundreds of cameras throughout the mansion, but he didn't allow them in his room, even though his parents insisted.
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    White Online
    Games · Alekzi
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    đŸ€” I mean it's good to have a long term goal but does feel a tiny bit forced, or it maybe feels forced at this point in the book while I as a reader don't fully understand mc's character and thought process yet. If it was me I wouldn't really hold a grudge, if anything the goddess should have a grudge from that interaction

    "Not even that bitch Livia
Watch this show carefully, oh great goddess! Because once I come back to you. You will regret ever meeting me."
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    Leave Me Alone, Heroines!
    Fantasy · ClashingBlades98
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented
    Did it ever work? No.
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    Xianxia Online
    Games · Cyclxne
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Commented

    kekw relevant even 100 years later pagman

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    Zenith Online: Rebirth of the Strongest Player
    Games · ApexPen
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  • Incognito0001
    Incognito00011yr
    Replied to SAK

    maybe he will get exponentially more points for killing superhumans or "higher" state beings than just regular humans

    [8 reality points gained]
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    Rebirth: Tyrant's New Reality
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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