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You have been updating inconsistently recently and uploading way less. Is it exams or something?
You were saying there were a dozen of merchants a day coming for his items. Such action wouldnât require 10 gaurds per person since quite a few use the same route. Using the same route merchants would then go group together to make the trip more profitable. Or you are telling me there were 400 guests dayly?
I was starting to like this story in the beginning and sorry for complaining so much, but this guy has a save the world mentality placing all blame on himself if he doesnât go spend every second helping others.
Also, he creates all these things which require quite a bit of know how and still he didnât think of his medicine being priced way higher after being bought by merchants for cheap. He should know better, especially with the cries we are getting from him about this not being how he wanted it. Since that would indicate that he has had some thoughts about it.
Why tf are you making the social standard of this world 2 sided? First itâs normal for the first child to succeed the crown even when said heir is female. Then you make it seem like almost all women are weaker by having this fella make the distinction of gender with your familiar. Here I thought that with it being normal for a woman to succeed without a fuzz and a world that spins around strength of a person you would not underestimate someone. Let alone as a bandit leader or whatever.
This is supposed the be a slice of life, no? Why does the MC take resposibility for everything and follow everyone and thing. It also seems that the side characters, who are supposedly from this world, need help with everything. I mean if those knights couldnât handle some of those things (and I get that they might not handle them all), then the world wouldâve been ruined already.
Is he going to take responsibility for everything happening in the world?
The only thing I could get mad about is paying for chapters, and even that doesnât get me mad. :)
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Itâs fine if there are really 2 people, however you make Blake say Lily and then 'Marie' answers. So even if it was first supposed to be Marie, now you are just using both names for 1 character.
Are you going to re-release this chapter?
Never seen a undercover fox before?
Bad fox, bad!
Alle hope is lost. If it was once a day the author wouldâve said it like that. The one a day is only a thing from the old days.
Thank you for the chapter.
Feet/inch/mile/yard?!
cm/m/ha/mm? What are we on?!
You are right! And how likely is it to be one time, especially when Jenny is more or less in a warzone while hiding undercover.
Her experience shouldâve build a pain tolerance, no? I mean, looking bacn at her 'ugly' face, I remember she was tortured in some way (prob not directly), but she should have a good familiarity with pain. All based on one though so if it is different from my memories you can easily point out my mistakes in what Iâve written.