So I know we were told there was going to be an editor starting a bunch of chapters back. But not seeing it. All the typos, and grammatical mistakes are really getting annoying.

Story isn’t bad, but not really good either. More of a meh. Couple things to note before starting. 1) Pay wall starts at chapter 19. Which is too early to know anything about the book. 2) Author has his own terminology for levels, grades, etc and doesn’t even try to explain any of it until at least chapter 100. 3) Around chapter 100 translation becomes spotty. Names get changed randomly, pronouns start switching, and some names just revert to the original language. This happens one sentence to the next. At one point the names changed within three words. (Seriously what translator translated the same word differently in the same sentence?) Over all after a couple hundred chapter I am kinda over the story. It’s been a good time killer while I am sick in bed, but is not something I am excited about.

Dude we get it! You have repeated this already.

This is just a useless paragraph that could be said in one sentence, instead of the redundancy.

Seems to have some potential, but when the aunty starts getting wet looking at her 13 yr old nephew’s hard on, I decided this isnt the story for me.

Did you read further, is it one of those novels? Pls let me know so I can drop it now.

Yeah sure. Author is sure trying hard to make this happen. No pun intended.

If that was the perpetrator, then why did the snakes uproot and runaway to the exact cave of the monster that scared them into running in the first place?

*she

If he can’t get it off how does he get it into the activation ritual?

Is this a translated work? If not, the author needs to work on syntax and grammar.

Please don’t turn into a harem book. It’s already looking like a pseudo-harem or Pokémon-harem, got to catch them all. He has the strong hero one, cat twins in maid costumes, a princess (whose probably going to be staying there), and as of tomorrow a little loli. It’s so played out and adds nothing to the story.

What happened to the myriad people all signing a contract not to reveal each others info?

So, what is this tier ranking? How does the MC automatically know all this? Why is everyone all cool with having their whole world upended? Interesting premise but so far writing is rather simple.

So this chapter feels a little worthless. I lIke this book but I don’t really feel it is really worth it anymore. It seems to be taking a long time to really go no where. And the cost of most of these chapters are stupidly high for the actual content they provide. So yeah, time to quit! Thanks for the entertainment so far and good luck with the rest of it

Yeah i turned on paragraph comments just to say this same thing. She has seen them before! But it’s a web novel I just have to get use to little errora.

So that was a really really short chapter

Yeah was just feeling this book is going way to slow. Not a bad book, but the pace is making me frequently stop to see if other novels have updated.

One arrow!!

How were they running away? I thought they were having difficulty retreating before the boss made a move. Now is it just wide open space and all the dozens of huge rodents are gone?? Yeah can’t do this book, too many stupid little things and we are only on chapter 10.