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Why was that a joke. Don’t get it?
Perfume mixed with sweat makes a tantalizing fragrance. Lol so weird.
My guess is that it is a poorly translated idiom. But I turned on paragraph comments just to see what others are thinking because it’s too weird. Lol
No it’s, Up, Up, Down, Down, Left, Right, Left, Right
Good start
So another one of those MCs that just sit mutely always lost in their own thoughts while the world keeps going. Don’t know how many books I have seen this in. I understand he is confused, but staying silent is really weird. And in a real situation it would be extremely off putting.
I am starting to think Deconstruction means something else to the author. Because no one naturally thinks deconstructing themselves is the answer to anything.
Author doesn’t know math.
He knows he is going to a very dangerous job and wants to get stronger to survive, but he is too afraid to take the less risky jobs that will make him stronger. So, yeah MC sucks so hard in the first half chapter I am going to set a new personal record of dropping a book before finishing chapter 1.
Not even worth his time, but yet drained his bullets.
Concur. So cringe.
Just kill this mc and give us a new one. All he does is exclaim (“!”) a lot and over react.
Yeah homeboy hasn’t seemed to notice that the item tags all mention out of game. And why didn’t we get a item description here.
Yeah I think this is where I drop the book. There is just nothing I really like about the main character and his interactions with others. It’s painful to read. Why does he have to act so circumspect with his own brother. Just say here is the facts 1) approached by lady, 2) offered a testing spot and help. What do you think? I bet he will probably hide everything about his territory and ability from his brother too. Instead of two minds working together he is stuck as a simpleton. Then add on all the times he is dazed, shocked, or confused and just spaces out. It’s just annoying. Sorry. Everything else seems to be a good start but I am not patient enough for the author to learn how to write realistic interactions. As a side note, I also don’t want to read another cliche school arc.
This guy really does feel like a moron at times.