Nah him playing football as like a qb would go crazy. Easy way to build hype around him. Make the team go to state or smthn. Jus not solely because of him, the rest of the team needs to be good to
It's definitely a unique idea that's implemented very well. I'm really sad it doesn't have more chapters and looks to have slow updates.
don't use the ** actions
Gald your back
do not use mum.
don't use parentheses, use a comma or something here
I'd like to think my comment brought this on, prolly not but so what
I was referring to how long it took to reach the school
yep. Flying Thunder God is its real name.
In what world are they qualified therapists
Absolutely Garbage, the Author downplays just how bad things could be and refuses to acknowledge the the mc could send the entire earth to the shadow realm in a instant. also, instead of a real punishment, Batman has dumba$$ Robin Apologize for almost Causing mc to slaughter the world like ants, for a tantrum he threw. It's the kind of story where the MC and everyone around him complains endlessly without truly doing anything just so the authors plot can move forward.
The consequences for Robin almost killing all of humanity, is a simple apology, now I know for sure why this story fell tf off.
when you say tho, it sounds exactly like the actually word. There is no difference and it's a matter of allowing one to read it without falling out of sync
do not shorten words into text slang. it is not okay.
Very good with a very novel premise that I've not seen in a marvel fanfic. Good Good Good Good Good Good. ÷ e . g. s
Stop asking things we already know one chapter after you tell us, at least make it abbreviated instead of just copy and pasting it.
You better have him change It to snoop Dogg like In black ops