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I completely forgot about those... though I need to do more research on them if I use them correctly my idea may work. Thank you.╰(*°▽°*)╯
Why does this situation smell like Ntr?😅
No, you are right there are a lot of points I didn't consider and just pushed as being a fantasy so it's possible, In all honestly I do not mind when you point these things out to me rather I'm grateful you did, as you know I'm only a starting author I don't have any past experience to rely on, so you pointing out these small details actually help avoid doing these mistakes again.
You know what... Bleach weapons are not a bad idea.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but from what I understand these weapons use a power called Prana which should be equivalent to magic or mana. But doesn't that mean as soon as you run out of Mana these weapons will be useless?
They are indeed excellent, but I want to keep it limited to melee weapons.
Although I'm not that familiar with berserk, the sword should be only made from Iron, from what the wiki said it can cut things as hard as steel. Although it's pretty impressive when you put it in the world of Danmachi and compare it with weapons made from high-ranked materials it will be lacking.
WHA-.... fine you might have guessed that but you won't guess the final boss hehe... please don't...
Well, he is a baby now and even if he can speak, the star magic system is a bit special.
You are not wrong but at the end of the day, it's just a simple village with no deity in it.
I never really considered this point, but I will be more careful about it in the future.
The dude already laughing alone in an abandoned basement 😂😂
Yup... Grammarly is really failing me here... I guess I need to read it slowly before releasing new chapters.
That's fine, I'm already thankful you gave my story a chance if it doesn't suit your taste I can't just force you to like it so I respect your decision. I'm aware that the story has some points that just don't make any sense or points as you said don't like (reincarnated characters), but every one of them has a purpose in the story no matter how stupid it may sound, however, it will take sometime before it starts showing, just like a puzzle you can only solve it when you bring it's pieces together.
...What's wrong with a head pat 😅
Huh?... what did I see? Wait actually I don't want to know...